Saamne tab tum aa jaana......!!

by Talat on July 15, 2006, 05:11:16 PM
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«Reply #90 on: September 04, 2006, 03:57:02 PM »
Its allright Bhondu ! Usual Smile

Nice work again...Bhondu, Gaurav and JHL !!!
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«Reply #91 on: September 04, 2006, 04:03:01 PM »
sukriya talat ji.
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«Reply #92 on: September 04, 2006, 04:03:56 PM »
Diye ummeedon ke bujhne se bhala kaise bachayen
Hawa ki ravish par ashiaana bana baithe hain hum

Hatheli se chupaaye hain apni khwaahishon ke jalte diye
Bujhne na paaye lau, is koshish main haath jala baithe hain hum

nazar nahin aata sab kuch hai nazar ke saamne dhuwaan sa
Ye na jaane kis mod pe zindagi ke, aa baithe hain hum !!
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«Reply #93 on: September 04, 2006, 04:07:08 PM »
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Behtareen ! superb !

Ek ek shabd achcha laga !

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«Reply #94 on: September 04, 2006, 04:15:21 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Diye ummeedon ke bujhne se bhala kaise bachayen
Hawa ki ravish par ashiaana bana baithe hain hum

Hatheli se chupaaye hain apni khwaahishon ke jalte diye
Bujhne na paaye lau, is koshish main haath jala baithe hain hum

nazar nahin aata sab kuch hai nazar ke saamne dhuwaan sa
Ye na jaane kis mod pe zindagi ke, aa baithe hain hum !!


bahut hi aacha likha hai talat ji...to jawab dene ki kosis hum bbhi kerenge.

hawa ki ravish per aashiyana hum banate hai.
ki aaj bhi takdeer se takrana aacha lagta hai.
jub tak hai dum takraunga is toofan se,
is toofaan se ladker bikher jaana aacha lagta hai.

shama ki khoobsurati ko paane ki chaah kerta raha her dum.
shama ki law mein jal jaana aacha lagta hai.
unke pyaar ko paane ki tammna her dum rakhi mainey,
paa na saku to unke pyaar mein mit jaana aacha lagta hai.
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«Reply #95 on: September 05, 2006, 03:30:46 PM »
bahut khoob talat aur bhondu ji

sham se phir teri tasveer liye baithe hain ham
ik  baar phir se tujhe dil me liye baithen hain ham

ashq aankhon se hain jaari ki rukate hi nahi
tera chehra inhi me phir chhupae baithen hain ham

ek baar abhi tu jaa shaamen hain kitani tanha
rasta phir se tera dekhne ko bahithen hain ham
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«Reply #96 on: September 05, 2006, 04:05:45 PM »
bahut khoob shakeel ji
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«Reply #97 on: September 07, 2006, 06:40:20 PM »
Thanks a lot Rajbir, Bhondu and Tabassum !!
Very nice reply Bhondu, and good one Tabassum !!

Tanhaaiyon ki qaid nahin, aa jaate hain wo sar-e-mehfil main
Aur hanste hue lab khaamosh ho jaate hain sar-e-mehfil main

Laakh humne dil ko sambhaala, dil beqaabu ho ke raha
Dhadkanen naam unka suna jaati hain sar-e-mehfil main !!
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«Reply #98 on: September 08, 2006, 04:42:05 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks a lot Rajbir, Bhondu and Tabassum !!
Very nice reply Bhondu, and good one Tabassum !!

Tanhaaiyon ki qaid nahin, aa jaate hain wo sar-e-mehfil main
Aur hanste hue lab khaamosh ho jaate hain sar-e-mehfil main

Laakh humne dil ko sambhaala, dil beqaabu ho ke raha
Dhadkanen naam unka suna jaati hain sar-e-mehfil main !!


bahut aacha likhi hai talat ji,

naam lekar humara wo bulate hai sari mehfil mein.
mere chehra ka ghoonghat uthate hai sare mehfil mein.
log soochte wo kertein hai humse bahut pyaar,
per sare gum humein wo de jaate hai sari mehfil mein.
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«Reply #99 on: September 10, 2006, 03:39:57 PM »
Thanks a lot Bhondu and Talat for appreciation ...
Nice work both of you ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #100 on: September 10, 2006, 03:55:26 PM »
Gum unka lekar hame koi fark nahi padta,
Waise bhi hamare gum ki buniyaad bahut pakki hai ...
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«Reply #101 on: September 11, 2006, 02:47:51 AM »
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Gum unka lekar hame koi fark nahi padta,
Waise bhi hamare gum ki buniyaad bahut pakki hai ...



gumon ki neev per jo aashina aapna banaya tha.
aansoo ki chot usay kahan tod paayegi.
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«Reply #102 on: September 13, 2006, 11:36:24 AM »
Thanks Bhondu, and JHL....nice ones from both of you...

Mausam badalte hain, haalat badalte hain
Mere dil ke magar na jazbaat badalte hain

Khalish anjaani si, ek chubhan si rehti hai
Wabasta tujhse , na khyaalat badalte hain !!
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«Reply #103 on: September 13, 2006, 11:47:52 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Bhondu, and JHL....nice ones from both of you...

Mausam badalte hain, haalat badalte hain
Mere dil ke magar na jazbaat badalte hain

Khalish anjaani si, ek chubhan si rehti hai
Wabasta tujhse , na khyaalat badalte hain !!


wonderful talat ......

kehte hain woh hamse ki hum pyaar tumhe karte hain
per is dil ke dard kab mujhe unki baato per yakeen karne dete hain

milti hai jab nazare toh kai sawal hain meri in aakho mein
hum unki nazar mein aksar un ansune se jawabo ko talasha karte hain!!
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«Reply #104 on: September 13, 2006, 11:50:16 AM »
JHL, Vikram, Talat, Ranju

Behtareen ! superb ! =D>

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