Saamne unke saara...

by Just_Hate_Love on January 05, 2005, 07:13:59 AM
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
Print
Author  (Read 2666 times)
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
Saamne unke saara jahaan pada hai abhi,
Humse milneki fursat kahaan hai abhi,

Hai agar taab to padhle chehra mera,
Dil ki baat ispe ayaan hai abhi,

Teri naa mein thi naa hi naa kal talak,
Phir bata naa mein kyu aaj hai haan abhi?

Shakh to shakh, saraa shajar jal gaya,
Phir kyun baaki mera aashiyaan hai abhi?

Mere pairo mein tale ab zamin ho naa ho,
Meri aakhon mein ek aasmaan hai abhi,

Fasle yu to sabhi mit gaye,
Ek doori darmiyaan hai abhi.
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2005, 07:22:50 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Saamne unke saara jahaan pada hai abhi,
Humse milneki fursat kahaan hai abhi,

Hai agar taab to padhle chehra mera,
Dil ki baat ispe ayaan hai abhi,

Teri naa mein thi naa hi naa kal talak,
Phir bata naa mein kyu aaj hai haan abhi?

Shakh to shakh, saraa shajar jal gaya,
Phir kyun baaki mera aashiyaan hai abhi?

Mere pairo mein tale ab zamin ho naa ho,
Meri aakhon mein ek aasmaan hai abhi,

Fasle yu to sabhi mit gaye,
Ek doori darmiyaan hai abhi.



Sorry dosto do bbar post ho gayi galti se.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2005, 11:50:59 AM »
simply beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! really har ek lafz bohot ache se chunna aur likha, sach me bohot bohot hi acha hai!

 :D
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2005, 11:35:20 AM »
Thnx Meenaji. Itni bhi tareef mat karo ki aage kuchh likh naa sake.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2005, 11:44:52 AM »
arreeeeeee im saying the truth na, aab mujeh jo acha lagta hai i say it saaf saaf sidhe sidhe, u write really very gud!  :D  keep it up!
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2005, 12:00:43 PM »
Thnx very much Meenaji.

Thik hai achchha to likhte hai
par aapke saath rehkar aur
bhi achchha likh lenge.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2005, 03:38:58 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thnx very much Meenaji.

Thik hai achchha to likhte hai
par aapke saath rehkar aur
bhi achchha likh lenge.


 :D

apni safalta ka hadqar hume na banao
hum to anjan hai, yeh baat na bhoolao,
shayari bhi apki dard bhi apka,
apni jeet ka chanda aap khud hi leherao!!!!!!!!

 :D
Logged
nidhi_yadein
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
1 days, 7 hours and 46 minutes.
~ nidhi ~

Posts: 5725
Member Since: Nov 2004


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2005, 05:33:18 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Saamne unke saara jahaan pada hai abhi,
Humse milneki fursat kahaan hai abhi,

Hai agar taab to padhle chehra mera,
Dil ki baat ispe ayaan hai abhi,

Teri naa mein thi naa hi naa kal talak,
Phir bata naa mein kyu aaj hai haan abhi?

Shakh to shakh, saraa shajar jal gaya,
Phir kyun baaki mera aashiyaan hai abhi?

Mere pairo mein tale ab zamin ho naa ho,
Meri aakhon mein ek aasmaan hai abhi,

Fasle yu to sabhi mit gaye,
Ek doori darmiyaan hai abhi.


Wow........excellent written.

nice meena g.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2005, 05:34:46 PM »
thanx!

 :D
Logged
nidhi_yadein
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
1 days, 7 hours and 46 minutes.
~ nidhi ~

Posts: 5725
Member Since: Nov 2004


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2005, 05:42:40 PM »
welcome Usual Smile
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
ok
«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2005, 02:48:36 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thnx very much Meenaji.

Thik hai achchha to likhte hai
par aapke saath rehkar aur
bhi achchha likh lenge.


 :D

apni safalta ka hadqar hume na banao
hum to anjan hai, yeh baat na bhoolao,
shayari bhi apki dard bhi apka,
apni jeet ka chanda aap khud hi leherao!!!!!!!!

 :D


Kya khoob likha hai Meenaji.
Maan gaye aapko.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2005, 05:29:04 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!!!

 :D
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2005, 05:48:35 AM »
You are most welcome Meenaji.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2005, 11:49:18 AM »
:D
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2005, 08:10:12 AM »
APNI AAKHON KE SAMANDAR MAIN UTAR JAANE DE,
 TERA MUJRIM HOON MUJHE DOOBKE MAR JAANE DE,
 ZAKHM KITNE TERI CHAAHAT SE MILE HAI MUJHKO,
 SOCHTA HOON KE KAHOON TUJHSE MAGAR JAANE DE.
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Saamne unke saara...
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 10:47:48 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.112 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer