Saans Hawaa Ban Kar Seene Ki.....

by Aryaan on July 13, 2005, 09:13:42 PM
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Aryaan
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Saans hawaa ban kar seene ki aatish ko barhkaaye tau
Jeevan phir bhi jeevan tehra, daaman maut bachaaye tau

Kaise jeete hain jeevan mein, kaise sath nibhaate hain
Aa kar thaam le koi hum ko aur koi samjhaaye tau

Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau

Apni maazi ki yaadon ke hum iklaute waaris hain
Jo bhi maang raha hai hum ko, unn ko bhi apnaye tau

Hum bhi bilkul toot gaye, unki bhi hain aankhein num
Lekin apne beech mein aa kar baat koi suljhaye tau

Khud ko ruswa karne se behtar hai khaamosh rahein
Aa kar beech kahaani mein tum jo kahin ghabraye tau

Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2005, 09:20:52 PM »
Jitani tareef likhu kam hogi Aryaan ji........bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.....

Dil se likhe shabad dil tak jaty hai
dekh kar teri tarap, kayun dard mere ubhar atty hai
Sochati hu kabhi, kayun iss dard se hum bach nahi paty hai
jitana bhi duniya dharmo per larr le, dard ke rishty phir sabko ek kar jaty hai!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2005, 09:21:18 PM »
Naam likhne bethe unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sayahi, dard ki lahre kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2005, 09:29:01 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jitani tareef likhu kam hogi Aryaan ji........bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.....

Dil se likhe shabad dil tak jaty hai
dekh kar teri tarap, kayun dard mere ubhar atty hai
Sochati hu kabhi, kayun iss dard se hum bach nahi paty hai
jitana bhi duniya dharmo per larr le, dard ke rishty phir sabko ek kar jaty hai!!!!!


Bohat shukriya Pooja.... & Nice reply...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2005, 09:30:07 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Naam likhne bethe unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sayahi, dard ki lahre kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi.

Kya kahoon main Pooja....... Bohat hi khubsoorat....
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Yoindian Ghunda
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2005, 09:55:48 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Naam likhne bethe unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sayahi, dard ki lahre kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi.



nice
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jalpari
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2005, 03:49:59 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Saans hawaa ban kar seene ki aatish ko barhkaaye tau
Jeevan phir bhi jeevan tehra, daaman maut bachaaye tau

Kaise jeete hain jeevan mein, kaise sath nibhaate hain
Aa kar thaam le koi hum ko aur koi samjhaaye tau

Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau

Apni maazi ki yaadon ke hum iklaute waaris hain
Jo bhi maang raha hai hum ko, unn ko bhi apnaye tau

Hum bhi bilkul toot gaye, unki bhi hain aankhein num
Lekin apne beech mein aa kar baat koi suljhaye tau

Khud ko ruswa karne se behtar hai khaamosh rahein
Aa kar beech kahaani mein tum jo kahin ghabraye tau

Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau.....

wowwwwww Aryaan.... bohut ache...
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jalpari
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2005, 03:51:20 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Naam likhne bethe unka to nazam ban gayi,
Ashq sayahi, dard ki lahre kalam ban gayi,
Woh alfaz kuchh aise bikhre fizaaon me,
Ki zindagi ek dard bhari gazal ban gayi.

very nice Pooja ji...
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2005, 07:16:40 AM »
nice one pooja G n Aryaan........................................... .!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2005, 07:31:58 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"


Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau




amazing Aaryan ... n pooja ji ... n every one ..!!1
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sandhaya
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2005, 07:35:26 AM »
very nice Aryaan ...............

Na kar aise dard ki baaton ko
na soch tu kisi bedard ki baaton ko
ki gum tuh bas kuch wakt teherne ter ghar aaye hai
jamane main bahut hai teri hi tarhan tanha
na ho maaus itna Hum bhi hain gum main phir bhi tujhe samjane aayen hai
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Yoindian Ghunda
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2005, 07:42:04 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
very nice Aryaan ...............

Na kar aise dard ki baaton ko
na soch tu kisi bedard ki baaton ko
ki gum tuh bas kuch wakt teherne ter ghar aaye hai
jamane main bahut hai teri hi tarhan tanha
na ho maaus itna Hum bhi hain gum main phir bhi tujhe samjane aayen hai
buht acha ji
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sandhaya
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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2005, 10:04:50 AM »
Quote from: "Yoindian Ghunda"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
very nice Aryaan ...............

Na kar aise dard ki baaton ko
na soch tu kisi bedard ki baaton ko
ki gum tuh bas kuch wakt teherne ter ghar aaye hai
jamane main bahut hai teri hi tarhan tanha
na ho maaus itna Hum bhi hain gum main phir bhi tujhe samjane aayen hai
buht acha ji
sukhriay Gunda ji .......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2005, 12:31:01 PM »
Bohat bohat shukriya Jalpari, Salma, Tosha & Sandhaya........

Nice One Sandhaya.....
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sandhaya
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2005, 12:40:29 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat bohat shukriya Jalpari, Salma, Tosha & Sandhaya........

Nice One Sandhaya.....
Ur welcome aryaan ji aur bahut sukhirya ............
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