Saans Hawaa Ban Kar Seene Ki.....

by Aryaan on July 13, 2005, 09:13:42 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 15, 2005, 03:09:18 PM »
Yeh zindagi bohat mukhtaser hai khayaal kar le
Taa'luq jo tu ne toaraa hai bahaal kar le
Numm aankh liye ghar se na nikla kar
Kahin aisa na ho tujh se koi sawaal kar le
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«Reply #16 on: July 15, 2005, 04:44:37 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Saans hawaa ban kar seene ki aatish ko barhkaaye tau
Jeevan phir bhi jeevan tehra, daaman maut bachaaye tau

Kaise jeete hain jeevan mein, kaise sath nibhaate hain
Aa kar thaam le koi hum ko aur koi samjhaaye tau

Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau

Apni maazi ki yaadon ke hum iklaute waaris hain
Jo bhi maang raha hai hum ko, unn ko bhi apnaye tau

Hum bhi bilkul toot gaye, unki bhi hain aankhein num
Lekin apne beech mein aa kar baat koi suljhaye tau

Khud ko ruswa karne se behtar hai khaamosh rahein
Aa kar beech kahaani mein tum jo kahin ghabraye tau

Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau.....


lovely ARYAAN,very nice pooja ji.
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«Reply #17 on: July 15, 2005, 04:57:56 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

lovely ARYAAN,very nice pooja ji.

Thanx alot Nidhi.....
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«Reply #18 on: July 27, 2005, 01:12:22 AM »

Koi kabhi unn chehron ko bhi parhey
Jo afsaanon ki tarha hote hain
Woh aankhein jin mein shokhiyon ki jagah
Gehrey gehrey samander hote hain
Woh hont jinhon ne hansi ki bajaye
Chup ki chaadrein orhi hoti hain
Woh dil jin mein hazaar khwahishein nahi
Tootey huwe armaan chupey hote hain...
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«Reply #19 on: July 27, 2005, 06:43:39 AM »
"Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau"
WOW aryaan bahut achaa likha hai par yeh line toh dil ke aar paar hee hogaye.......very touching!!!

Aur sab na bhi kamaal likha hai.......GOOD JOB!!!!...tareef ke kabil hai......nice nice!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #20 on: July 27, 2005, 07:05:22 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Saans hawaa ban kar seene ki aatish ko barhkaaye tau
Jeevan phir bhi jeevan tehra, daaman maut bachaaye tau

Kaise jeete hain jeevan mein, kaise sath nibhaate hain
Aa kar thaam le koi hum ko aur koi samjhaaye tau

Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau

Apni maazi ki yaadon ke hum iklaute waaris hain
Jo bhi maang raha hai hum ko, unn ko bhi apnaye tau

Hum bhi bilkul toot gaye, unki bhi hain aankhein num
Lekin apne beech mein aa kar baat koi suljhaye tau

Khud ko ruswa karne se behtar hai khaamosh rahein
Aa kar beech kahaani mein tum jo kahin ghabraye tau

Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau.....


wow wonderfull Aryaan ji.............
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«Reply #21 on: July 27, 2005, 09:36:38 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Koi kabhi unn chehron ko bhi parhey
Jo afsaanon ki tarha hote hain
Woh aankhein jin mein shokhiyon ki jagah
Gehrey gehrey samander hote hain
Woh hont jinhon ne hansi ki bajaye
Chup ki chaadrein orhi hoti hain
Woh dil jin mein hazaar khwahishein nahi
Tootey huwe armaan chupey hote hain...


wah aryaan,ek ek alfaaz me dard hi dard hai,excellent.
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«Reply #22 on: July 27, 2005, 01:14:09 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Saans hawaa ban kar seene ki aatish ko barhkaaye tau
Jeevan phir bhi jeevan tehra, daaman maut bachaaye tau

Kaise jeete hain jeevan mein, kaise sath nibhaate hain
Aa kar thaam le koi hum ko aur koi samjhaaye tau

Inn ashkon se doob ke aakhir hum ne hansna chaha hai
Na-mumkin ko mumkin karna koi hamein sikhlaaye tau

Apni maazi ki yaadon ke hum iklaute waaris hain
Jo bhi maang raha hai hum ko, unn ko bhi apnaye tau

Hum bhi bilkul toot gaye, unki bhi hain aankhein num
Lekin apne beech mein aa kar baat koi suljhaye tau

Khud ko ruswa karne se behtar hai khaamosh rahein
Aa kar beech kahaani mein tum jo kahin ghabraye tau

Yeh lo duniya waalo tum par Aryaan ne khud ko waar diya
Ab tum mein se koi aaye, aur ussey dafnaaye tau.....


bahut bahut hi achha hai Aryaanji..veryyyyyy nice......aapki post pad kar jeewan ki sachaai pata chal jaati hai.toooo guudddd....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #23 on: July 27, 2005, 02:14:24 PM »
Bohat shukriya Isha, Nikki, Nidhi & Dolly.......
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: July 27, 2005, 02:39:46 PM »
Dono poems bohot achchi hain Aryaan......beautiful..as always..... and nice all.... !!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #25 on: July 28, 2005, 02:34:34 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Dono poems bohot achchi hain Aryaan......beautiful..as always..... and nice all.... !!!!!

Bohat shukriya Talat.......
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angel4u
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«Reply #26 on: July 27, 2006, 10:43:03 AM »
Too good...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #27 on: July 28, 2006, 09:46:12 PM »
Thanks Angel... Usual Smile
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