Saanse___________Baadal

by baadal102 on October 13, 2009, 07:24:46 AM
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME



Siskio ki jindgi, aab khatam kyo nahi ho jaati,
Bahut jalta raha hu, aab ye saanse band kyu nahi ho jaati,

Maut si bereham ghari jee raha hu har pal,
Khoon ki rawani fir kyu aab band nahi ho jaati,

Dekh chuka hu iss jhuti dunia ka har sach,
Fir kyu nahi ye dunia aab mujh se chut jaati,

Nahi bacha koi bhi ahsaas aab kisi baat ke liye,
Hontho ki ye kapkapahat fir band kyo nahi ho jaati,

Har baar karta hu us KHUDA se fariyaad,
Fir aaj mari ye dua kabool kyo nahi ho jaati,

Thak chuka hai BAADAL khud ko bhigote hue,
Aab Baadal ke liye bhi barsaat kyo nahi ho jaati,

Aaya tha jis ghadi main, mai iss matlabi dunia mai,
Fir kyo nahi Ae-KHUDA usi ghari main, mari mout ho jaati,  

Fir kyo nahi Ae-KHUDA usi ghari main, mari mout ho jaati..........


ghari means waqt,samay,pal,pahar....






Baadal
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2009, 08:12:40 AM »
Wish u very very Happy Birthday to u Badal Ji

Aapki life me ye din humesha aaye aur humesha khushiya Laye

Wish u all the best Badal Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2009, 03:57:07 AM »
WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAADAL JI.
MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY.
GOD BLESS YOU AND GRANT THE DESIRES OF YOUR HEART. hello

Very touching and beautiful poem.bahut bahut khoob.great creation,excellent.
 icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2009, 04:24:06 PM »

Kahan baadalon mein chupe baite they ji... waise aapne bahut accha likha... magar udasi kyu?
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2009, 07:22:32 AM »
aap sabhi ka mai tahe dil se sukergujaar hu
jo aap ne mujhe padha or mujhe wish kiya.
THANX A LOT ALL OF U
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2009, 02:42:41 AM »
Happy Belated Birthday.

Main to bahut bahut late ho gayi hoon wish karne mein sad5

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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2009, 11:05:39 AM »
thanx a lot angel

tongue3 waise aap time se aati hi kab hai tongue3

thanx yarra
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2009, 05:18:21 PM »
Yaar Ye Kaisi Line Likhi Hai Aakhri Mein, Rab Tumhe Lambi Umr De,.

Khush Raho,.
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2009, 06:26:45 AM »
Baadal Bhai.. Belated Happy Birthday Bhai... Usual Smile

Par Aise Khushi Ke Mauke Par Yeh dard Bhari Nazm Kyun Yaaar..? Par Kuch Bhi Ho Dost.. Likha ek ek Lafz Lajawab Hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2009, 08:37:56 AM »
Azeem yaara wo sahi likha hai

thax azeem yaara
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baadal102
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2009, 08:40:50 AM »
Mann ji thanx a lot
bahut bahut sukria janab
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2009, 03:48:26 PM »
Itne udaasi bhare alfaaz Baadal ji...bahut dard hai aapki likhi inn lines mein...khuch likh rahi hu..ummid karti hu aapko pasand aayega...


Kyu inn alfaazon mein itna dard smaaya hai
Apni hi zindagi se kyu tu paraaya hai

Jis ghari tu aaya tha iss duniya mein
Uss pal ki khushi ka aehsaas
aaj bhi tere apno ki aankhon mein smaaya hai

Iss duniya mein koi kisi ka nahi hota,ye sach hai
Par koi hai issi duniya mein
jo khuda ne sirf tere liiye banaaya hai

Gar na ho araji poori jo di hai khuda k darbaar mein
Toh sochna issi mein teri bhalaayi ko chupaaya hai

Mat maang khud k liye yha se jaane ki dua tu rab se
Sun dhyan se har pal ki dhun ko,sun uss saaj ko
jo teri zindagi ne har pal bajaya hai
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2009, 01:52:37 PM »
Itne udaasi bhare alfaaz Baadal ji...bahut dard hai aapki likhi inn lines mein...khuch likh rahi hu..ummid karti hu aapko pasand aayega...


Kyu inn alfaazon mein itna dard smaaya hai
Apni hi zindagi se kyu tu paraaya hai

Jis ghari tu aaya tha iss duniya mein
Uss pal ki khushi ka aehsaas
aaj bhi tere apno ki aankhon mein smaaya hai

Iss duniya mein koi kisi ka nahi hota,ye sach hai
Par koi hai issi duniya mein
jo khuda ne sirf tere liiye banaaya hai

Gar na ho araji poori jo di hai khuda k darbaar mein
Toh sochna issi mein teri bhalaayi ko chupaaya hai

Mat maang khud k liye yha se jaane ki dua tu rab se
Sun dhyan se har pal ki dhun ko,sun uss saaj ko
jo teri zindagi ne har pal bajaya hai



nikhaar ji aap ne sach mai bahut aacha likha hai
aur jo aap ne mujhe samjhane ki koshish ki hai
umeed hai use mai poora kar saku.

thanx a lot nikhaar ji


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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2009, 02:02:11 PM »
May God bless you Baadal ji...hamesha khush rahiye
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