Saare Dard Jo Peyham tumko.....................

by aaina on September 12, 2010, 03:43:28 PM
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Haazreen e mehfil ek arse ke baad dard ki is mehfil mai kuch likh raha huN umeed karta huN ke meri ye choti si koshish aapko achi lagegi apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega shukriya


Jaadu nagri waala koii pass bitha kar daikho to
kaise inme meiN doobunga aankh mila kar daikho to

khaab sunhaane kitne sundar aur kitne aawaara haiN
yaad ki karneY pehloo mai ik shaam sula kar daikho to

kitni narmi kitni thandak iske ooper chaaii hai
raat diwaani oos ki chadar, tan se laga kar daikho to

aasaaN ho jaayenge wo pal, haiN jo tum par bhaari se
apne dil ke saare qisse, humko suna kar daikho to

saare dard jo payham tumko apni simt bulaate haiN
phool bana dunga meiN unko, mujhme sama kar daikho to

aksar naam mera jo aaye, aankho tumhari kyuN bhr aaye
itni qubaat hai jab mujhse, haath baDa kar daikho to

wehshat hai jo dil par taari, chhat jaayegi pal mai saari
rootha hai jo tumse aslam, usko mana kar daikho to







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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2010, 03:49:29 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wow too Good Aslam ji!! bahoot khoob... ek ek shabd ka moti sa piroya hai app ne.... bahoot khoob... Good creation....
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 03:53:05 PM »
Bahut sundar peshkash hai aap ki Aslam Ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2010, 05:45:19 PM »
Aslam Saheb Aadaab!

Behad umdaa gazal se bazm ko nawaaza hia janab... Daad kabool kijiye......... Bahut umda... Usual Smile

hume 2nd and 4th sher bahut umdaa lage... Daad janab.... Aise hi umdaa gazal se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye.... Khush o Aabaad rahe ... Khuda Hafez.         
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2010, 07:16:00 PM »
bht hi behtareen gazal hai ye aapki aslam ji
har sher me dard chhupa nazar aata hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2010, 05:30:40 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai Aslam ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2010, 06:16:26 AM »
WAH  WAH KYA BAAT HAI    AAINA JI.......

JAADU NAGRI WAALE HAM MATWALE
HAMSE DIL LAGA KAR DEKHO TO
SARE DARD TERE DOOR HOJAYEGE
HAME APNA BANA KAR DEKHO TO..
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2010, 02:50:54 PM »
Waah ji waahi aslam ji bahut khoob......
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2010, 04:15:20 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 12, 2010, 03:49:29 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wow too Good Aslam ji!! bahoot khoob... ek ek shabd ka moti sa piroya hai app ne.... bahoot khoob... Good creation....


Pooja jii bhut bhut shukriya is hosla afzaii ka yuN hi saath datii rahiye Usual Smile




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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 11:12:17 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 12, 2010, 03:53:05 PM
Bahut sundar peshkash hai aap ki Aslam Ji


Rajesh sahab aapne hamesha hi mera hosala badhaaya hai bhut bhut nawaazish is saath ki shukriya


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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 11:14:17 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 12, 2010, 05:45:19 PM
Aslam Saheb Aadaab!

Behad umdaa gazal se bazm ko nawaaza hia janab... Daad kabool kijiye......... Bahut umda... Usual Smile

hume 2nd and 4th sher bahut umdaa lage... Daad janab.... Aise hi umdaa gazal se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye.... Khush o Aabaad rahe ... Khuda Hafez.         



Sameer sahab zaraanawaazi hai aapki jo adna si koshish ko aap yuN saraah rahe haiN bhut bhut shukriya umeed aap yuN hi hosla badhaate rahenge


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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 11:15:55 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on September 12, 2010, 06:04:55 PM
Bahut Khub Aslam Ji


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~


Thnxxx so much Shihab, dua mai yuN hi yaad rakhiye


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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2010, 11:18:13 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 12, 2010, 07:16:00 PM
bht hi behtareen gazal hai ye aapki aslam ji
har sher me dard chhupa nazar aata hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause


Nawaazish hai aapki, ye husn e nazr hai jo yuN daikhta hai, hosla afzaii ke liyeN  tahe dil se shukurguzaar huN, yuN hi nazr e karm karti rahiye


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«Reply #13 on: September 15, 2010, 11:19:08 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on September 13, 2010, 05:30:40 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai Aslam ji...!!!


kapil sahab bhut bhut nawaazish........



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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2010, 09:08:19 AM »
ji bhaut khoob....................... Applause Applause Applause
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