***Saath Chod Diya***

by Meena on February 04, 2005, 06:11:37 PM
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Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,
Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!

Mana ke shabdo se tujhe aaj kareeb na ane diya,
Par aye dost tere dil ne aaj kyu mujshe muh mood liya?

Duniya ki barwa nahin woh saath de na de,
Dukh is baat ka ke tune bhi aaj saath humara chod diya!
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2005, 06:24:30 PM »
hmmm.......kya baat hai,aaj koi bade mood me lag raha hai,excellent poetry bhi likh raha hai. Winking

Beautiful,every word has a unique beauty meena.Very nice.
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2005, 06:26:10 PM »
thanx nidhi, i believe in jo shabd dil se ate hai super duper hi hote hai!

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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2005, 06:34:12 PM »
Ya,right meena. :D

"Dil se nikalte thhi kabhi pyar ki bhasha,
 phir kabhi dil se nikli intezar ki bhasha,
 aaj bhi mujhe intezaar hai..................,
 kab niklegi tere dil se ikraar ki bhasa."
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2005, 06:37:16 PM »
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Ya,right meena. :D

"Dil se nikalte thhi kabhi pyar ki bhasha,
 phir kabhi dil se nikli intezar ki bhasha,
 aaj bhi mujhe intezaar hai..................,
 kab niklegi tere dil se ikraar ki bhasa."


wah ....
maine tow 100 bar ikraar kiya
kya tune kabhi izhaar kiya
 aur fhir bhi ilzaam mujhe hi diya
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2005, 07:05:21 PM »
nice nidhi and yogi!

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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2005, 08:56:24 PM »
good work teddygal n nidhi Puzzled ! .... tum bhi likh hi leti ho theek theek Puzzled !
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2005, 11:24:48 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,
Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!

Mana ke shabdo se tujhe aaj kareeb na ane diya,
Par aye dost tere dil ne aaj kyu mujshe muh mood liya?

Duniya ki barwa nahin woh saath de na de,
Dukh is baat ka ke tune bhi aaj saath humara chod diya!

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very nice meena ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2005, 03:28:07 AM »
Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
TUM KO APNA KAH TU TUM NEY HI CHORR DIYA


PRINCESS K NAAMMMMMMMMMM
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2005, 06:42:43 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,
Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!

Mana ke shabdo se tujhe aaj kareeb na ane diya,
Par aye dost tere dil ne aaj kyu mujshe muh mood liya?

Duniya ki barwa nahin woh saath de na de,
Dukh is baat ka ke tune bhi aaj saath humara chod diya!


Wah Meena ji,

Dil todne ki bat kyu ki hai tumne aaj yu,
Mera dil toh kabse hi toota kiya jane kyu,
Kehte hai wo ki humne unko akela choda hai,
Kaise bataye kis tarah usne bhi muh ko moda hai,
Jab bhi kareeb aaye hai hum, kaante ruswai mili,
Dene chale the ek khushi,khud humko tanhai mili,
Phir bhi kade hai aaj hum wahi pe unke intezaar mein,
Kabhi toh unhe ehsaas hoga kya kya kiya hai pyar mein.
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2005, 07:41:06 AM »
god one amit.
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2005, 08:31:52 AM »
thank u heart, aisa-hi ji, fakharenaveed ji and creator ji!

 :D
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2005, 08:32:41 AM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,
Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!

Mana ke shabdo se tujhe aaj kareeb na ane diya,
Par aye dost tere dil ne aaj kyu mujshe muh mood liya?

Duniya ki barwa nahin woh saath de na de,
Dukh is baat ka ke tune bhi aaj saath humara chod diya!


Wah Meena ji,

Dil todne ki bat kyu ki hai tumne aaj yu,
Mera dil toh kabse hi toota kiya jane kyu,
Kehte hai wo ki humne unko akela choda hai,
Kaise bataye kis tarah usne bhi muh ko moda hai,
Jab bhi kareeb aaye hai hum, kaante ruswai mili,
Dene chale the ek khushi,khud humko tanhai mili,
Phir bhi kade hai aaj hum wahi pe unke intezaar mein,
Kabhi toh unhe ehsaas hoga kya kya kiya hai pyar mein.


very nice and gud!!!!!

koi saath na de mera, chalna mujhe ata hai,
har aag se wakif hoon, jalna mujhe ata hai! (NM)
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2005, 08:36:16 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
god one amit.


Thanx Nidhi ji... tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2005, 08:38:02 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
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Quote from: "Meena"
Teri dosti ka aaj humne acha sila dekh liya,
Bikre te hum aur tune aur bikher diya,
Dukhate te jo dil humara door kade hokar,
Us beedh me tune aaj khud ko bhi shamil kar liya!

Mana ke shabdo se tujhe aaj kareeb na ane diya,
Par aye dost tere dil ne aaj kyu mujshe muh mood liya?

Duniya ki barwa nahin woh saath de na de,
Dukh is baat ka ke tune bhi aaj saath humara chod diya!


Wah Meena ji,

Dil todne ki bat kyu ki hai tumne aaj yu,
Mera dil toh kabse hi toota kiya jane kyu,
Kehte hai wo ki humne unko akela choda hai,
Kaise bataye kis tarah usne bhi muh ko moda hai,
Jab bhi kareeb aaye hai hum, kaante ruswai mili,
Dene chale the ek khushi,khud humko tanhai mili,
Phir bhi kade hai aaj hum wahi pe unke intezaar mein,
Kabhi toh unhe ehsaas hoga kya kya kiya hai pyar mein.


very nice and gud!!!!!

koi saath na de mera, chalna mujhe ata hai,
har aag se wakif hoon, jalna mujhe ata hai! (NM)


Hmmmm

Ye jante hai hum bhi sanam tumko nahi jarurat meri,
Par kaise kahe har kam apni jarurat ke liye karte nahi.
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