Saath paya bhi to nahin...

by Meena on December 27, 2004, 02:43:35 PM
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Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki pehedari mere ashk karte hai sanam,
koi aur inke pehedari ke kabil bhi to nahin...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2004, 03:58:23 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  meena........bahot khoob....
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2004, 04:48:11 PM »
thanx waheed ji!  :D  bas try karti hoon kabhi kabhi aap sab jaise acha nahin likh sakhti  Puzzled !
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2004, 10:47:58 AM »
Aapko kisne kaha ki aap accha nahin likhtin,apki koshishein kamyab hoti hain,aur ye duniya mein bahot hi kam log k saath hota hai.
Its brilliant Usual Smile
Do write or say koshish.
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arzoo
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2004, 08:52:51 PM »
Meena ...I love your shayari... you write really good...
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husain52
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2004, 08:21:34 AM »
good work meena
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nishita
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2004, 09:11:53 AM »
wow meena Usual Smile gud work..!
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2004, 11:34:32 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Aapko kisne kaha ki aap accha nahin likhtin,apki koshishein kamyab hoti hain,aur ye duniya mein bahot hi kam log k saath hota hai.
Its brilliant Usual Smile
Do write or say koshish.


thanx nidhi sis! haunsla aur bhi badh gaya! thanx a lot!

 :D
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2004, 11:34:58 AM »
Quote from: "arzoo"
Meena ...I love your shayari... you write really good...


awwww thanxxxxx arzoo sis!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2004, 11:35:24 AM »
Quote from: "husain52"
good work meena


shukriya ji!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2004, 11:35:46 AM »
Quote from: "nishita"
wow meena Usual Smile gud work..!


thanx nishu sis!
 :D
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2004, 11:39:51 AM »
" zindagi

Kia kia ajab gul khilati hay zindagi
Sukh kay musmoon ko ghjm ki chadar urhati hay zindagi
Pehly ankhon my khawb sjati hay
Phir unhi khwaboon ka mazaq urati hay zindgi
Pehly khushboon say pholoon ko mehkti hay
Phir unhi pholoon say khushboo ko churati hay zindagi
Pehlay gham-e-yaarsay milati hay
Phir usi gham-e-ya.ar say juda karati hay zindagi
Pehlay jeenay ka jawaz humay batlati haydistancebw
Phir usi jawaz Ko mita si jati hay zindagi
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2004, 11:47:37 AM »
"Pehly khushboon say pholoon ko mehkti hay
Phir unhi pholoon say khushboo ko churati hay zindagi "

beautidulllllllll lines! bohot khub!

 :D
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2004, 12:40:42 PM »
u r always welcome Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2004, 05:05:15 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
thanx waheed ji!  :D  bas try karti hoon kabhi kabhi aap sab jaise acha nahin likh sakhti  Puzzled !


oye meena..........tum accha likhti ho.......main kah raha hoon na......tum likhti raho ....... really meena......  keet  writing meena........  :lol:

Ye Kaaghazi Phool Jaise Chehre, Mazaq Uraate Hen Aadmi Ka
Inhen Kaash Koi Bata De, Maqaam Ooncha Haisaadgi Ka...........
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