sab kuch luta k...

by upma on January 16, 2008, 06:51:56 AM
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Sab kuch luta ke bhi hum apna
kuch paane ki aas lagaye baithe hai...

Seene me sulag rahe hai armaan kai
jinhe apna sathi banaye baithe hai...

Jante hai tum sath nahi ho mere
fir bhi tumko apni jaan de baithe hai...

Umeed hai ki ye pathar kabhi pighal jaega
tabhi to tumhe khuda maan baithe hai...

Wo tumhi ho jo in ashko ko pani samajhte ho
humto inhe hi teri nishani maan baithe hai...


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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2008, 07:09:28 AM »
Really Beautiful... Usual Smile
Superb work Again.. 
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upma
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2008, 07:33:43 AM »
once again thanks4 appreciation
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prmchawla
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2008, 09:04:49 AM »
bahut ache upma ji,

is kadar hum yaar ko manaane nikle,
ki uski chahat ke hum deewaane nikle,
jab bhi use dil ka haal batana chaha,
uske paas waqat na hone ke laakh bahane nikle.

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upma
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2008, 12:08:36 PM »
shukriya premji..aapne bhi khoob kaha
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2008, 06:08:47 PM »
bahoot khoob upma!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2008, 08:12:37 AM »
bahut khoob upma...bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2008, 08:19:14 AM »
its really beautifull
bahot khoob upma ji
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