SACHI MOHABBAT

by gum on December 18, 2004, 04:47:16 PM
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Chand Taron ka noor tujh par barse,
har koi teri chahat ko tarse,
teri zindagi mein aaye itni khushiyan,
ki tu ek gum pane ko tarse
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2004, 05:07:11 PM »
"HAMNE BHI CHAHA HAR MANZIL APKE KAREEB HO,
 HAR LAMHA APKA SAATH HAMEINNASEEB HO,
 PAR WAHAN BHAGWAN BHI KYA KARE...
 ...JAHAN INSAAN KHUD HI BADNASEEB HO"[/b]
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2004, 05:21:17 PM »
badnaseeb insaan nahin hota,
fark zindagi dekhne ka nazariya hota hai!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2004, 06:38:45 PM »
Quote from: "gum"
Chand Taron ka noor tujh par barse,
har koi teri chahat ko tarse,
teri zindagi mein aaye itni khushiyan,
ki tu ek gum pane ko tarse
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2004, 04:30:22 PM »
"AKHIR KAB TAK NAZARIYE KE WAHAM MEIN RAHEIN,
 KISI KE INTEZAAR KE SITAM MEIN MAREIN,
 HOTI HAI HAD HAR CHEEZ KI,
 PYAR,NAZARIYE AUR BADNASEEB KI"[/b]
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2004, 04:34:25 PM »
very nice nidhi sis!

hadh me rehte to yuh tumse pyar  na karte,
yuh teri bewafai ko apna bana na lete,
hadh me rehte to tumare jane ke baad hum bhi jate,
yuh auron ke liye jeene ki koshish na karte.
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2004, 05:00:07 PM »
"SACHI MOHABBATKO TUMNE MERI LALKARA HAI,
 KAL TAK TO THA,AB NA TUMHE MERA SAHARA HAI,
 AAOGE EK NA EK DIN TUM MERE PAAS. . .,
 YEH VISHWAS HAMARA HAI,
 SAATH NA DE SAKUNGI TAB MAIN TUMHARA,
 MAJBOOR DIL HAMARA HAI . . . ."
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2004, 05:11:11 PM »
saath na mang us shaks ka,
jisko khud apni manzil ka pata na ho...
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2004, 05:18:20 PM »
skool  glasses2
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2004, 07:52:07 AM »
wowowowowo sabhi  logon ne bahot accha likha........keep continue..........:lol:

"DIL ki tadap ko kya jaan saka hai koi,
meri kasak ko kya pehchaan saka koi,
tumne to bas kehe diya bhool jaane do,
pehle pyar ko kab bhula saka hai koi................
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2004, 08:29:49 AM »
It was nice job bbby all specially by gum n nidhi...
Keep writing.
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2004, 10:53:20 AM »
VERY NICE MEENA JI AND WAHEED BHAI!

"YUN BEWAFA NA KAHO MERE YAAR KO,
 BAS WOH SAMJHA NA MERE PYAR KO,
 USKO APNI MANZIL MEIN MERI ZAROORAT NAHIN,
 PAR SAMJHEGA PYAR MEIN JAB ZAROORAT PADEGI."
 (GIVE  :wis 2 ME!)
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2004, 10:59:18 AM »
THANX just_hate_love m:ail



"MOHABBAT KA NATEEJA HAMNE DUNIYA MEIN AISA DEKHA HAI,
 JINHE DAWA THA WAFA KA UNHE BEWAFA HOTE DEKHA HAI."

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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2004, 04:46:54 PM »
very nice waheed ji and nidhi sis!

na socha tha ke tum yuh bewafa ho jaoge,
na socha tha ke tum ek phool ko yuh tood jaoge,
jee nahin sakhte the tum mere bin,
na socha tha ke tum mujhe yuh bhool jaoge.
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«Reply #14 on: December 20, 2004, 04:54:28 PM »
THANK U MEENA JI!APNE BHI BAHOT KHOOB LIKHA.

"KAUN KISKE KAREEB HOTA HAI,
  APNA-APNA NASEEB HOTA HAI,
  YAAD AATA HAI JAB KOI,
  DARD DIL KE KAREEB HOTA HAI"
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