~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Duniya ki iss bheed main hum bhi kho chale,
Apna watan chorr hum bhi pardes kay ho chale..

Jiski tanhai main sahara bana tha main kabhi,
Unki nazron main ab hum puraane ho chale..

Daur-e-gurbat aya toh apni parchayi bhi ghayab hogayi,
Jiske dil ki dhadkan tha; unke liye ab hum begane ho chale..

Jo kehta tha kay ‘Khamosh’ tujh bin yeh zindagi kaisi,
Unkay liye ab hum bas sajane ka saman ho chale..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 09:07:09 PM »

sachhai se rubaru krwate ho aap.
behad umda


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 09:08:43 PM »

Arey shukriya Nirala jee..
Teh dil se..
Khush rahiye..!


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nirala

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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 09:14:24 PM »

nahi pahle aap khus rahne ka waada kro fir nirala bhi khus rahega bas.
khus rahiye


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2010, 09:18:20 PM »

Arey ab jo dil likhwaega,
woh toh likhna parrega..
Khush rehne ka wada..hmm Parwaaz jee ki do lines yaad aa rahi hai:
edit karke likh raha hoon:
"Jabse toota hai dil mera,
Muskurate khudko tasveeron main bhi nahin dekha.."


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 09:19:05 PM »

Teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye.!


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nirala

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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 09:30:59 PM »

hmm ab Nirala jee ki 2 khatarnaak line suniye
""
kyun ilzaam lagate ho khuda par
bewafai par apne sanam ke 'nirala'
mohabat usse puch kar kab ki thi
""
thanx
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-Pari-

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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 09:35:33 PM »

Awesome Kalaam hai rahim ji...is nachis ki Daad Kabool karein..


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 09:36:07 PM »

Bohat Khoob Rahim, May Allah Bless U...

Sab Kuch Lutaane Ke Baad Main Ye Jaana Hai "Azeem,.
Har Cheez Yahaan Keemat Se Aur Kismat Se Milti Hai,.

-Azeem-


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 10:32:55 PM »

Nirala jee,
wakei khatarnak lines..
Sach bayan karti..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 10:33:37 PM »

Quote from: -Pari- on December 27, 2010, 09:35:33 PM

Awesome Kalaam hai rahim ji...is nachis ki Daad Kabool karein..

Teh dil se shukriya Pari jee..!
Khush rahiye.!


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2010, 10:34:44 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on December 27, 2010, 09:36:07 PM

Bohat Khoob Rahim, May Allah Bless U...

Sab Kuch Lutaane Ke Baad Main Ye Jaana Hai "Azeem,.
Har Cheez Yahaan Keemat Se Aur Kismat Se Milti Hai,.

-Azeem-

Bahaut bahaut shukriya mere bhai..
Bahaut achi lines..
Bahaut acha aur sacha likhte ho mashAllah se..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2010, 10:50:43 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on December 27, 2010, 10:34:44 PM

Bahaut bahaut shukriya mere bhai..
Bahaut achi lines..
Bahaut acha aur sacha likhte ho mashAllah se..
Khush rahiye..!

Rab Khair Kare, May Allah Bless us All,.


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 06:16:05 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on December 27, 2010, 09:04:13 PM

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

dost akhiri line to keher dha gayi reee..

bahut bahut khoob..

mujhse kabhi mere ansuu mangne wale muh mod chale
khus to hun ab bhi bas dil se paani beheta hai~


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Re: ~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 08:38:50 AM »

Bahut achchhaa kalaam Rahim jee!


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