Samajh lena ke wo hoon main

by angel4u on July 10, 2008, 02:44:21 AM
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Tere Daaman Se Lipat Ke Jhonka Jo Chale,
Teri Masoom Nigahon Ko Chhu Chale,
Chume Tere Ashqon Ko Jo Pyaar Se,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Kabhi Tanhayi Mein Koi Aah Jo Nikle,
Mohabbat Ki Baarish Ho Ashqon Mein,
Us Bauchhar Mein Simat Aaye Jo Kapkapi,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Chahat Ke Safar Mein Thokarein Bahut Khayi,
Phir Bhi Har Saans Mein Tasveer Teri Paayi,
Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2008, 03:52:18 AM »
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main..........

Angle Ji Bahot Din Baad Aap Ki Nazm Dekhne Ko Mili Hai

Chahat Ke Safar Mein Thokarein Bahut Khayi,
Phir Bhi Har Saans Mein Tasveer Teri Paayi,

Bahot Khoob Lines Hai.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2008, 05:12:41 AM »
nice creation angel ji
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2008, 02:12:47 PM »
Thanks Muhammed ji.
well thoda busy thi job ke chakkar mein,
thanks for liking and appreciating.
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2008, 02:13:21 PM »
Thanks Kaushik
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2008, 10:24:27 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on July 10, 2008, 02:44:21 AM
Tere Daaman Se Lipat Ke Jhonka Jo Chale,
Teri Masoom Nigahon Ko Chhu Chale,
Chume Tere Ashqon Ko Jo Pyaar Se,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Kabhi Tanhayi Mein Koi Aah Jo Nikle,
Mohabbat Ki Baarish Ho Ashqon Mein,
Us Bauchhar Mein Simat Aaye Jo Kapkapi,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Chahat Ke Safar Mein Thokarein Bahut Khayi,
Phir Bhi Har Saans Mein Tasveer Teri Paayi,
Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...

Bohut khoob bohut hi umda behtareen alfaaz ka istemaal kiya he aap ne badi gehri baateN bayaaN ki he, aap ki nazam bohot pasand aai.  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2008, 02:35:18 AM »
 Applause Applause
angel bahoot hi pasand aai aapki ye ghazal.......ek ek line bilkul napi-tuli si aur behtreen

Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2008, 03:15:58 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on July 10, 2008, 02:44:21 AM
Tere Daaman Se Lipat Ke Jhonka Jo Chale,
Teri Masoom Nigahon Ko Chhu Chale,
Chume Tere Ashqon Ko Jo Pyaar Se,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Kabhi Tanhayi Mein Koi Aah Jo Nikle,
Mohabbat Ki Baarish Ho Ashqon Mein,
Us Bauchhar Mein Simat Aaye Jo Kapkapi,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Chahat Ke Safar Mein Thokarein Bahut Khayi,
Phir Bhi Har Saans Mein Tasveer Teri Paayi,
Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...

Yeh nazm to waqaee umda aur dard se khoob bhari hai...
Wah,,, Angel4U,,, buhat bahtreen...

Aur bade dinon baad darshan diye hain...
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2008, 03:25:24 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on July 10, 2008, 02:44:21 AM
Tere Daaman Se Lipat Ke Jhonka Jo Chale,
Teri Masoom Nigahon Ko Chhu Chale,
Chume Tere Ashqon Ko Jo Pyaar Se,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Kabhi Tanhayi Mein Koi Aah Jo Nikle,
Mohabbat Ki Baarish Ho Ashqon Mein,
Us Bauchhar Mein Simat Aaye Jo Kapkapi,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main,

Chahat Ke Safar Mein Thokarein Bahut Khayi,
Phir Bhi Har Saans Mein Tasveer Teri Paayi,
Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...


angel ji,


aapne atyant prabhaavshaali likha he.likhte rahiye isi tarah.shubhkaamnaye.

Prateek
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2008, 06:37:11 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 11, 2008, 10:24:27 PM
Bohut khoob bohut hi umda behtareen alfaaz ka istemaal kiya he aap ne badi gehri baateN bayaaN ki he, aap ki nazam bohot pasand aai.  Applause

Thanks dear. mujhe laga pehle ke kiisne reply nahi kiya to zaroor kuch kami rahi hogi, but happy today... Usual Smile
thanks for liking.
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2008, 06:40:38 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on July 12, 2008, 02:35:18 AM
Applause Applause
angel bahoot hi pasand aai aapki ye ghazal.......ek ek line bilkul napi-tuli si aur behtreen

Raaste Mein Jo Phool Aaye Kuchal Dena,
Samajh Lena Ke Wo Hoon Main...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you, for liking.
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2008, 06:42:49 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 12, 2008, 03:15:58 AM

Yeh nazm to waqaee umda aur dard se khoob bhari hai...
Wah,,, Angel4U,,, buhat bahtreen...

Aur bade dinon baad darshan diye hain...

pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2008, 06:48:13 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 12, 2008, 03:25:24 AM

angel ji,


aapne atyant prabhaavshaali likha he.likhte rahiye isi tarah.shubhkaamnaye.

Prateek

thanks prateek ji. for liking the poem. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2008, 06:53:18 AM »
Ho qubool koi teri dua to samajh lena wo hoon main,
Bhigi palkon se muskura pade lab to samajh lena wo hoon main,
Tere saath na reh paaye zindagi bhar to kya hua sanam,
Jab aayine mein khudko dekho to samajh lena wo hoon main...
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2008, 06:55:08 AM »

bina baat bhar aaye,
plaken dabdaba jaye
rah naino me, na chalke jo,
use fir ashq na kahna
samajh lena ke wo hoon mai....

koi phool murjhaya,
koi toota hua patta,
hawaon me jo lahraye
tere aangan me bah aaye
samajh lena ke wo hoon mai

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