SAMARPAN

by ANAAMIKA on January 30, 2009, 09:49:38 AM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #15 on: September 20, 2009, 08:27:08 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Anaamika ji n Smardia ji, really beautiful creation, Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #16 on: September 20, 2009, 08:35:08 AM »
Madhweshji fir se aapka dhanyawaad aapne meri rachnao ko padha aur saraha....Thank you from bottom of my heart...

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 20, 2009, 08:27:08 AM
Wah bahut khoob Anaamika ji n Smardia ji, really beautiful creation, Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #17 on: September 20, 2009, 02:48:30 PM »
Quote from: ANAAMIKA on January 30, 2009, 09:49:38 AM

मेरा यह समर्पण
उस अनामिक के लिए,
जिसे मैने देखा था,
चाहा था !
लेकिन कभी मिल नही सकी
क्योंकि
जब होना था मेरा पदार्पण,
एक सरिता --
हो चुकी थी उस सागर को अर्पण..... ANAMIKA


Wah Anamika Ji.. Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Dil Tak Utar Jane wale Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne..!! In Chand Lafzon Ki Jitni Taareef Ki Jaye Kam Hai.. Apne Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya Hai aapne In Khubsoorat Alfaazon me.. Daad Kubool Karen... Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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mistufer
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«Reply #18 on: September 20, 2009, 11:43:23 PM »
bahut gharayi hai aapki panktiyon mein
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #19 on: September 21, 2009, 06:38:38 AM »
MAAN Bhai aapka tehe dil se shukriya.....
Jab dil par chot lagti hai tou lafz apne aap kalam se uterne lagte hain...
AAP K Alfaaz bahut he encouraging hain...dhanyawaad... icon_flower

Quote from: Mann on September 20, 2009, 02:48:30 PM
Wah Anamika Ji.. Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Dil Tak Utar Jane wale Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne..!! In Chand Lafzon Ki Jitni Taareef Ki Jaye Kam Hai.. Apne Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya Hai aapne In Khubsoorat Alfaazon me.. Daad Kubool Karen... Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #20 on: September 21, 2009, 06:43:31 AM »
Niraji aapko meri panktiye pasand aayee mera dard aap tak pahuncha..Nari, nari ka dard shayad jaldi samajh paati hai
Tahe dilse aap ka shukriya....


Quote from: Nira on September 20, 2009, 11:43:23 PM
bahut gharayi hai aapki panktiyon mein
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #21 on: July 26, 2010, 07:37:49 AM »
THANKS Pankhuriji.....aapko pasand aayee.....

Quote from: Pankhuri2 on February 20, 2009, 05:19:54 PM
Nice Lines Anaamika!!
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #22 on: July 26, 2010, 01:03:03 PM »
Bahut kam shabdo mai bahut kuchh keh diya Anaamika-di.....
DEVNAGARI lipi ko dekhkar tou mann prashann ho gaya...
Ek ladki k es dard ko main samajh rahi hu... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on January 30, 2009, 09:49:38 AM

मेरा यह समर्पण
उस अनामिक के लिए,
जिसे मैने देखा था,
चाहा था !
लेकिन कभी मिल नही सकी
क्योंकि
जब होना था मेरा पदार्पण,
एक सरिता --
हो चुकी थी उस सागर को अर्पण..... ANAMIKA
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #23 on: July 27, 2010, 10:20:12 AM »
Surendra-ji kya kehne attyant sunder jawaab diya hai aapne....
Padh kar sochne par majboor ho gayee....
Nari ki peeda kahu ya shakti kahu ya sahansheelta......,anyway superb... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: smardia on February 04, 2009, 11:11:36 AM
...Anamikaji kuchh lines likhi hain....jo sadar samarpit hain....keh nahi sakta pasand aayengi ya nahi....
समर्पण
सागर तो विशाल होते हैं
कई सरिताओं का उसमें समागम
बदलो तुम रुख़ अपना नदी सम
इठलाती बलखाती चंचल..........
या बनो शांत सरल निर्मल
न बन सकी राधा या रुक्मणी
तो कोई गम नही
अगर सच्चा है समर्पण
तो जिओ मीरा बन
और रखना याद
सरिताएँ घीस-घीस
पाथर को भी बना देती हैं
श्याम की मूरत.....
 
सुरेंद्र
 
 

 

 
सुरेंद्र  icon_flower
 
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baadal102
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«Reply #24 on: July 27, 2010, 10:25:48 AM »
Quote from: ANAAMIKA on January 30, 2009, 09:49:38 AM

मेरा यह समर्पण
उस अनामिक के लिए,
जिसे मैने देखा था,
चाहा था !
लेकिन कभी मिल नही सकी
क्योंकि
जब होना था मेरा पदार्पण,
एक सरिता --
हो चुकी थी उस सागर को अर्पण..... ANAMIKA



bahut khoob anaamika ji wah bahut kuch samet ke rakh diya aap ne inn lines mai,daad kabool farmaye aap
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baadal102
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«Reply #25 on: July 27, 2010, 10:28:21 AM »
Quote from: smardia on February 04, 2009, 11:11:36 AM
समर्पण
सागर तो विशाल होते हैं
कई सरिताओं का उसमें समागम
बदलो तुम रुख़ अपना नदी सम
इठलाती बलखाती चंचल..........
या बनो शांत सरल निर्मल
न बन सकी राधा या रुक्मणी
तो कोई गम नही
अगर सच्चा है समर्पण
तो जिओ मीरा बन
और रखना याद
सरिताएँ घीस-घीस
पाथर को भी बना देती हैं
श्याम की मूरत.....
 
सुरेंद्र
 
 

 

 
सुरेंद्र  icon_flower
 

bahut hi umda surender ji wah janab har line bahut khoob Applause
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smardia
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«Reply #26 on: July 29, 2010, 04:22:50 AM »
Koyal-ji aapka tahe dil se dhanyawaad.....aapne itna purana thread dekha aur saraha....aabhar......

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 27, 2010, 10:20:12 AM
Surendra-ji kya kehne attyant sunder jawaab diya hai aapne....
Padh kar sochne par majboor ho gayee....
Nari ki peeda kahu ya shakti kahu ya sahansheelta......,anyway superb... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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smardia
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«Reply #27 on: July 29, 2010, 04:37:17 AM »
Baadal-ji aapka bhi tahe dil se shukriya.....aapko mera jawaab pasand aaya........


Quote from: baadal102 on July 27, 2010, 10:28:21 AM
bahut hi umda surender ji wah janab har line bahut khoob Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #28 on: July 30, 2010, 08:31:13 AM »
Thanks Surendraji....mein tou kai baar padhti hu ye thread achha lagta hai....
Anaamika ki ankahi kahaani .... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Quote from: smardia on July 29, 2010, 04:22:50 AM
Koyal-ji aapka tahe dil se dhanyawaad.....aapne itna purana thread dekha aur saraha....aabhar......
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #29 on: August 03, 2010, 06:08:07 AM »
Pyari koyal...yo ki chekti cheediya...thanks a lot....
Tum bhi bahut pyaara....kabhi kabhi bahut chat-patta likhti ho...mazaa aa jaata hai tumhe padh k....u hi hassi bikherti raho...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 26, 2010, 01:03:03 PM
Bahut kam shabdo mai bahut kuchh keh diya Anaamika-di.....
DEVNAGARI lipi ko dekhkar tou mann prashann ho gaya...
Ek ladki k es dard ko main samajh rahi hu... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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