SAMBHAL JAATAA........ "MohaN"

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SAMBHAL JAATAA

Gar aataa merey mazaar pe, bas woh to pigal jaataa,
Dil mein bharaa sab gubaar usskaa bhi nikal jaataa!

Kaash ke donon mil kar ke, khoob saath saath rotey,
Aankhein saaf hojaatin mausam nikhar nikhar jaataa!

Agar aataa to merey dil mein woh jhaank bhi letaa,
Kitnee mohabbat hai humein usskaa pataa chal jaataa!

Gar kuchh din saath saathh bhi reh kar hee dekhtaa,
Par nahin achhaa huaa, woh to bikhar bikhar jaataa!

Abb bas karo, jumbash-e-nazar kee hasrat hee thee,
MohaN jo girtaa thaa shayad phir se sambhal jaataa!!

Surindar. N                 "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2015, 06:14:32 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2015, 01:12:24 PM »
Kya baat hai waaaah  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2015, 01:46:05 AM »
bahut shukria Nandbahu Sahib.
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2015, 09:14:56 AM »
"सम्भल जाता"

गर आता मेरी मजार पे, बस वो तो पिघल जाता,
दिल में भरा सब गुबार उसका भी निकल जाता !

काश के दोनों मिल कर के, खूब साथ साथ रोते,
आंखें साफ हो जाती मौसम निखर निखर जाता !

अगर आता तो मेरे दिल में वो झांक भी लेता,
कितनी मोहब्बत है हमें उसका पता चल जाता !

गर कुछ दिन साथ साथ भी रह कर ही देखता,
पर नहीं अच्छा हुआ, वो तो बिखर बिखर जाता !

अब बस करो, जुम्बश-ए-नज़र कि हसरत ही थी,
मोहन जो गिरता था शायद फिर से सम्भल जाता !!

Surindar.N                "मोहन"

वाह वाह.... बहुत सुन्दर रचना सर जी।
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2015, 03:56:40 PM »
"सम्भल जाता"

गर आता मेरी मजार पे, बस वो तो पिघल जाता,
दिल में भरा सब गुबार उसका भी निकल जाता !

काश के दोनों मिल कर के, खूब साथ साथ रोते,
आंखें साफ हो जाती मौसम निखर निखर जाता !

अगर आता तो मेरे दिल में वो झांक भी लेता,
कितनी मोहब्बत है हमें उसका पता चल जाता !

गर कुछ दिन साथ साथ भी रह कर ही देखता,
पर नहीं अच्छा हुआ, वो तो बिखर बिखर जाता !

अब बस करो, जुम्बश-ए-नज़र कि हसरत ही थी,
मोहन जो गिरता था शायद फिर से सम्भल जाता !!

Surindar.N                "मोहन"

वाह वाह.... बहुत सुन्दर रचना सर जी।
bahut shukria Umrav Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2015, 03:15:25 PM »
SAMBHAL JAATAA

Gar aataa merey mazaar pe, bas woh to pigal jaataa,
Dil mein bharaa sab gubaar usskaa bhi nikal jaataa!

Kaash ke donon mil kar ke, khoob saath saath rotey,
Aankhein saaf hojaatin mausam nikhar nikhar jaataa!

Agar aataa to merey dil mein woh jhaank bhi letaa,
Kitnee mohabbat hai humein usskaa pataa chal jaataa!

Gar kuchh din saath saathh bhi reh kar hee dekhtaa,
Par nahin achhaa huaa, woh to bikhar bikhar jaataa!

Abb bas karo, jumbash-e-nazar kee hasrat hee thee,
MohaN jo girtaa thaa shayad phir se sambhal jaataa!!

Surindar. N                 "MohaN"
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2015, 06:10:59 AM »
Waaaaaah kya baat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2015, 02:14:31 PM »
Waaaaaah kya baat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut shukria Mast Khalader Sahib.
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