~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~:Shayri-E-Dard

Sammual

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Har Baar Rulate Ho Tum,
Jab Yaad Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Yaadain Tumhe Rulayengi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar State Ho Tum
Jab Rooth jate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Tadpate Ho Tum
Jab Khwabo Main Door Jate Ho Tum
Us Din Tum Bahut Pachtayogi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Darate Ho Tum
Jab Aahat Ban Kar Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Har Aahat Tumhe Satayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi


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salil2002

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 02:01:32 PM »

bahut achche sam bhai


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Sammual

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 02:03:08 PM »

Shukriya Sahil Bhai.


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thegrimreaper

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 02:11:23 PM »

good writing sammuel


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Sammual

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 02:13:34 PM »

Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 16, 2009, 02:11:23 PM

good writing sammuel

Shukriya Dost.


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 02:21:06 PM »

Quote from: Sammual on August 16, 2009, 01:59:19 PM

sam, bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aap ney .. aur bahut dil sey, dard meh likha hai... kamaaaaaaaaaal kaa hai yeh ... dil koh chu gaya ..


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Sammual

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 02:22:55 PM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jasbir Ji.


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Roja

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 04:15:31 PM »

Very nice lines Sam ji


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 04:17:42 PM »

Waah Kya baat hai Sammual ji.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai ..


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Sammual

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 01:06:52 PM »

Shukriya Roja Ji And Sophi Ji.


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aaina

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 11:58:20 PM »

Quote from: Sammual on August 16, 2009, 01:59:19 PM

waah bhut khoob sam kya baat hai bhut hi achay keep it up


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2009, 01:37:22 AM »

Quote from: Sammual on August 16, 2009, 01:59:19 PM

bahoot bahoot khoob sammual .. such main ek ek shabd dil ko chu raha hai.....

dil e tanhaai jab tere pass aayegi
yaad rakh teri bhi saansein ruk jayegi

zindagi chalti rahegi ek lash ki tarah teri
us waqat meri yaad tujhe behad satayegi

kahte hai jeevan ka chakkar chalta rahta hai upper niche
Kal mai roti thi teri yaad main, kal teri ankhein bhi barsat bahayegi....

us din teri sanein bhi ruk jayegi.....


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thegrimreaper

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2009, 11:35:54 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 18, 2009, 01:37:22 AM

accha likha hai hello


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Sammual

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2009, 03:00:17 PM »

Quote from: aaina on August 17, 2009, 11:58:20 PM

waah bhut khoob sam kya baat hai bhut hi achay keep it up

Shukriya Aaina Ji.

Quote from: Pooja on August 18, 2009, 01:37:22 AM

Shukriya Pooja Ji And Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hai Aapne. Applause


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DhavalRami

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Re: ~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2009, 04:45:37 PM »

Sammual jee:

namaste!

aapne bahot achha liKhaa haii.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


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