Sapna____________Baadal

by baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 01:37:00 PM
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Sapna jo tha mera wo sapna hi reh gaya,
Katel ker ke wo apna, hum se begana ho gaya,

Nahi chaha tha kabhi ki wo door ho jaaye,
Lakin waqt mari kismat se daga ker gaya,

Dastoor jamane ke kuch aise the pyar ke,
Sapna jo tha sagar mai milne ka wo adhura reh gaya,

Tha jo sapna ek ghar or aangan ka mera,
Wo na jaane kanha dunia ki bheed mai kho gaya,
 
Bahut sanjoya or sambhala us sapne ko,
Sapna aakhir sapna tha jo tut hi gaya,

waqt mari kismat se daga ker gaya,
Katel ker ke wo apna, hum se begana ho gaya..........




Baadal
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cara
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2008, 01:55:09 PM »
very good  baadalji...

kya kya sapne the mere,
aur sapne hi rahegaye.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2008, 02:01:28 PM »
Very Nice and Very Touching..
Good Work.. Baadal Ji..
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2008, 02:25:00 PM »
thanx a lot
Cara Ji
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Mahiya Ji





Baadal
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Sonia01
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 03:12:42 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on December 29, 2008, 01:37:00 PM
Sapna jo tha mera wo sapna hi reh gaya,
Katel ker ke wo apna, hum se begana ho gaya,

Nahi chaha tha kabhi ki wo door ho jaaye,
Lakin waqt mari kismat se daga ker gaya,

Dastoor jamane ke kuch aise the pyar ke,
Sapna jo tha sagar mai milne ka wo adhura reh gaya,

Tha jo sapna ek ghar or aangan ka mera,
Wo na jaane kanha dunia ki bheed mai kho gaya,
 
Bahut sanjoya or sambhala us sapne ko,
Sapna aakhir sapna tha jo tut hi gaya,

waqt mari kismat se daga ker gaya,
Katel ker ke wo apna, hum se begana ho gaya..........


Baadal

Very good creation baadal jii
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2008, 04:05:06 PM »
thanx a lot sonia ji




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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2008, 05:15:19 PM »
Bohat khoob badal......

Khvaab is aa.Nkho.n se ab ko_ii churaa kar le jaaye
qabr ke suukhe huye phuul uThaa kar le jaaye

mu.ntazir phuul me.n Khushbuu kii tarah huu.N kab se
ko_ii jho.nke.n kii tarah aaye u.Daa kar le jaaye

[mu.ntazir=waiting]

ye bhii paanii hai magar aa.Nkho.n kaa aisaa paanii
jo hathelii pe rachii meha.ndii u.Daa kar le jaaye

mai.n mohabbat se mahakataa huaa Khat huu.N mujh ko
zindagii apanii kitaabo.n me.n dabaa kar le jaaye

Khaak i.nsaaf hai naabiinaa buto.n ke aage
raat thaalii me.n chiraaGo.n ko sajaa kar le jaaye

[naabiinaa=blind]

                        -Bashir Badr-
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gurinder
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 08:09:22 PM »
bahut khoobsoorat
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 09:14:01 PM »
Bahut khoob Baadal Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2008, 09:39:51 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob baadal ji! bahoot he achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne...ek gaane ki line yaad aa gai apki yah kavita parra kar

waqat karta jo wafa, app humare hote
hum bhi aoro ki tarah, apko jaan se pyare hote (nm)
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2008, 04:29:08 AM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Baadal Bhai.. dil Ko Chhoo gaye aapke Yeh Dard Bhare Alfaaz.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..!! Jazzbaaton Ko Bahut Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.,.! Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 05:13:41 AM »
thanx a lot sajid ji  notworthy
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 05:15:19 PM
Bohat khoob badal......

Khvaab is aa.Nkho.n se ab ko_ii churaa kar le jaaye
qabr ke suukhe huye phuul uThaa kar le jaaye

mu.ntazir phuul me.n Khushbuu kii tarah huu.N kab se
ko_ii jho.nke.n kii tarah aaye u.Daa kar le jaaye

[mu.ntazir=waiting]

ye bhii paanii hai magar aa.Nkho.n kaa aisaa paanii
jo hathelii pe rachii meha.ndii u.Daa kar le jaaye

mai.n mohabbat se mahakataa huaa Khat huu.N mujh ko
zindagii apanii kitaabo.n me.n dabaa kar le jaaye

Khaak i.nsaaf hai naabiinaa buto.n ke aage
raat thaalii me.n chiraaGo.n ko sajaa kar le jaaye

[naabiinaa=blind]

                        -Bashir Badr-
good sharing sajid ji  Applause



Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 05:14:42 AM »
thanx a lot
gurinder ji
N
rajesh ji


Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 05:29:01 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 29, 2008, 09:39:51 PM
Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob baadal ji! bahoot he achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne...ek gaane ki line yaad aa gai apki yah kavita parra kar

waqat karta jo wafa, app humare hote
hum bhi aoro ki tarah, apko jaan se pyare hote (nm)


thanx a lot pooja ji

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baadal102
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 05:30:54 AM »
Quote from: Mann on December 30, 2008, 04:29:08 AM
Wah Kya Baat hai Baadal Bhai.. dil Ko Chhoo gaye aapke Yeh Dard Bhare Alfaaz.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..!! Jazzbaaton Ko Bahut Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.,.! Applause


**~** Mann **~**

bahut bahut sukria mann ji
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