SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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«Reply #15 on: September 16, 2009, 01:36:32 PM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on September 15, 2009, 07:43:29 AM

Kya kahe Saahil ji.....dil ko hila kar rakh diya aapki iss poetry ne.....
i m totally speechless....

Kya poora hoga wo sapna jo dekha uss baap ki aankho ne
Kya rakhege dahej k lalchi log uski beti ko khushiyo mein
Aaj jo maange hai paise unhone,wo dekar beti ki doli toh chali gayi
Kya hoga aage kaun jaane darr hai kahi doli na badal jaaye arthi mein
tearyeyed

bahut bahut khoob pooja dear
aapne lagta hai topic ko kaafi gaur se samjha tha
khoobsurat reply hai

har dua meri, ab teri ho chali hai
meri yeh zindgi ab teri ho chali hai
bas yaad karna ek baar jo kabhi gham ho
waise toh meri har khushi ab teri ho chali hai


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salma786

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #16 on: September 16, 2009, 07:16:49 PM »

Bahoot acchi tarah se apne apni soch ko zahir kiya... Nice creation Applause


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dead heart

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2009, 07:32:19 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on September 16, 2009, 01:34:08 PM

aapki baat bikul wajeeb hai.......... chhote bhai ab theek hai na
magar kabhi kabhi insaani majbooriyan itni bad jaati hai kii insaan chah kar bhi aisa kadam ootha leta hai jise wohg oothana nahin chahta
aur mere dost mere khayal se jo insaan apni jaan deta hai woh bujdil nahin hota .bas waqt ka maara hota hai
kyunki apni jaan dena koi asaan kaam nahin
waise tumhaara nazariya bahbut bahut pasand aaya is par kucch likhne kii koshish jaroor karoonga

na maut kii chahat hai , na zindgi se dushmani meri
mujhe toh kbhuda ne bhaja tha, keh , jab mann kare laut aana

Bahaut khoob...Haan apni jaan dena asan nahin hota mager koi akal mandi ya samajdari ya bahaduri ka kam bhi nahin hota...Bas Khuda pe bharosa rakhna chahiye...Insaan ka khazana khali hogaya toh kya, uss rabb ka khazana toh hai na...Kuch likh raha hoon main...Umeed hai sandesh miljaega...

Apni pareshanion ke aagey yun na hara karo,
Khud khushi karne kabhi na socha karo,
Mera rabb tumhe saab kuch ata farmaega,
Bas miljaega sab kuch dua se; yeh soch kar dua kiya karo...


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_Vicky_

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #18 on: September 19, 2009, 06:30:09 AM »

Wah Salil Bhai.. Dil Tak Utar Gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab aur Gahari Soch ke sath Likhi Hui Yeh Rachna Hai aapki.. jo Apne Jazzbaaton Ko Khud Lafzon me bayan kar rahi hai..! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. !!

Nikhaar Ji & Rahim Bhai.. aap Dono Ne Bhi Kamaal Likha Hai Doston..

**~** Mann **~**


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dead heart

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #19 on: September 19, 2009, 08:22:45 PM »

Shukriya Vikas bhaijan...


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salil2002

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #20 on: September 20, 2009, 06:49:17 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on September 16, 2009, 07:16:49 PM

Bahoot acchi tarah se apne apni soch ko zahir kiya... Nice creation Applause

bahut bahut shukriya salma dear


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salil2002

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #21 on: September 20, 2009, 06:51:48 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 16, 2009, 07:32:19 PM

bahut achche chote bhai
baat aapki zaayaz hai isliye sar aankhon par


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salil2002

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #22 on: September 20, 2009, 06:52:53 AM »

Quote from: Mann on September 19, 2009, 06:30:09 AM

bhai itni izzat bakhsne k liye bahut shukriya


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dead heart

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #23 on: September 20, 2009, 11:57:50 AM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on September 20, 2009, 06:51:48 AM

bahut achche chote bhai
baat aapki zaayaz hai isliye sar aankhon par

Shukriya!!! Apne bhi bahaut sahi baat ki thi...Apka kalam sar aankhon par...


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salil2002

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Re: SAPNA~~yeh aankhen marne k baad hi dekh paayengi~~ SAAHIL

«Reply #24 on: January 09, 2010, 01:20:04 PM »

thanks rahim


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