sapno ke jakhamo mai Ek Mitha sa jahar hai

by Pooja on August 02, 2005, 03:31:26 PM
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Pooja
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dastak sunati hu pal pal, per dastak deta koi nahi
dharkata hai dil dhak dhak, jeevan dikhai deta nahi
sapno ke jakhamo mai Ek Mitha sa jahar hai
najaro ke samne hai jo pal pal, wo dikhai kayun deta nahi!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2005, 03:37:46 PM »
very nice sis ................................................. .............
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2005, 03:42:22 PM »
Dil ke jkham muje roj tarpaty hai
phir bhi teri tarap dil se jati nahi

roj dil choor choor hokar bikharata hai
phir bhi jubaan per kabhi tere liye bad-dua atti nahi

yahi soch kar dil ko samjh leti hu
wo karam tere, yah karam mere

kayun kabhi insaan banane ki fidrat
Tujme atti nahi>>>>>>>
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2005, 04:26:25 PM »
Aitbaar ka taar jab toot gaya toh
Sur-e-mohobbat sajaayen kaise
Ek woh hi tha umeed-e-asaraa
Diye ab ansoo se jalaye kaise!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2005, 04:28:16 PM »
Kya baat hai Pooja..... Bohat khoob....

Seene se mere zehar utar-ne nahi detey
Zinda rahein woh log, jo marne nahi detey
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2005, 06:56:26 PM »
gham apna chhupana hai .....ashkon ko lootaya hai
pather ka sajana hai .........dil apna jisse lagaya hai

jina hai bemaani sa ............dil ne ab sawal uthana hai
sansey mili hai mujhko ....jo mujhko nibhana hai

tum aur ho e chand ........aur akash hai wo aur
rishta hai mera us sey.....jo mujhko nibhana hai

tanha safar aur mushkil ......sab raah sajana hai
hai door khud sey jina aur khood ko bhulana hai
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2005, 05:46:52 AM »
bahut vadiya pooja ji.......kya khoob likha hai!!!!!!!!!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2005, 08:42:50 AM »
nice Pooja ji .........aur good Aryaan...........

Rishta mera gum se purana lagta hai
mere dil mujhe koi diwana lagta hai
sochta hai raat din usko jisne zakam diye
has ke gum uthane ka wada koi purana lagta hai
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dolly
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2005, 12:10:40 PM »
nice allz.....................

inn nazaaron mein nazar nahi tikti...
iss jahan main kabhi mohabbat nahi milti...
nazron ne humein aaj roka hai........
ke mohabbat haqeeqat nahi sirf ek dhoka hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2005, 04:20:01 PM »
Thnaks isha, sandhaya and dolly.........

good one sandhaya, nice wordings dolly......

sapno ke jakhamo mai Ek Mitha sa jahar hai
raat ho jaati hai bahoot lambi, najar atti nahi sahar hai
khud ka khud se na raha koi rishta, kaisa yah mere payar ka kahar hai
kaya Rub se karu shikayat ab, yah sari ussi ki to mahar hai!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2005, 04:40:14 PM »
koi nam-o-nishan puchhe to bas itana bataa denaa,
takhallus 'khamosh' hai, aur ashko ki basati me rehte hai!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2005, 05:39:48 PM »
wow sis kamaal ka likhti hain aap.....

na pyar hi raas aya humein
na hum kissi ki berukhi ko apna sahara hi bana sake

dard itna tha tujhe na paane ka zaalim
hum tujhe shabdon mein keh kar na bata sake
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2005, 06:08:44 PM »
Shukariyan Nidhi.........nice wordings...

dastak uski abhi tak deewaro per gunjati hai
dharkan uski abhi tak angaaro si dil mai ghumati hai
her ek lamha, sanp ki tarah jakkarr leta hai
her pal nigaah, bas ek shakas ko dhoondati hai!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2005, 08:24:36 PM »
Nice Ones Pooja & Nikki.................................
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2005, 08:35:45 PM »
Shukariyan Aryaan ji, app bhi kuch likhaty to acha lagta!!!!
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