Sapnon ka meena bazar...mann

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Sapnon ka meena bazar...

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar,
Aur usmain sajaya tha
Khushiyon ka sajo saman.

Ek taraf tha gham ka baksa
Ek taraf khushiyon ki peti
Gham lao bakse main rakh do
Peti khol ke khushiyan le lo
Bant paun main khushiya sabko
Aisa tha mera andaz.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar.

Aansu lekar aaye the sab
Unke badle khushiyan lin
Hamne unke sab gham lekar
Badle main kuch khushiyan di.
Jismain sabko gham ke badale
Milna tha pyara arman.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar.

Par ek din hua kuchh aisa
Wo sab laut ke wapas aaye

Hamse wo kuchh aise bole
Bas khushiyon ke saudagar
Itne se to kam na hoga
Tune toda hai dil sabka
Tu bhi khush rah nahin sakega.

Ham sab itna hi kah paye
Khush rahna kab chahte the ham
Mushayen kab chaha hamne
Tabhi to apni sari khushiyan
De di hamne gham ke badale
Ab to khushiyan bachi kahan hain
Ek laga hai dher ghamon ka.

Sab kuch ganwa diya hai hamne
Jama nahin ye karobar.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar,
Aur usmain sajaya tha
Khushiyon ka sajo saman.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2012, 05:26:14 AM »
bahut khoob mann ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2012, 06:39:18 AM »
Sapnon ka meena bazar...

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar,
Aur usmain sajaya tha
Khushiyon ka sajo saman.

Ek taraf tha gham ka baksa
Ek taraf khushiyon ki peti
Gham lao bakse main rakh do
Peti khol ke khushiyan le lo
Bant paun main khushiya sabko
Aisa tha mera andaz.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar.

Aansu lekar aaye the sab
Unke badle khushiyan lin
Hamne unke sab gham lekar
Badle main kuch khushiyan di.
Jismain sabko gham ke badale
Milna tha pyara arman.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar.

Par ek din hua kuchh aisa
Wo sab laut ke wapas aaye

Hamse wo kuchh aise bole
Bas khushiyon ke saudagar
Itne se to kam na hoga
Tune toda hai dil sabka
Tu bhi khush rah nahin sakega.

Ham sab itna hi kah paye
Khush rahna kab chahte the ham
Mushayen kab chaha hamne
Tabhi to apni sari khushiyan
De di hamne gham ke badale
Ab to khushiyan bachi kahan hain
Ek laga hai dher ghamon ka.

Sab kuch ganwa diya hai hamne
Jama nahin ye karobar.

Hamne ek lagaya tha
Sapnon ka meena bazar,
Aur usmain sajaya tha
Khushiyon ka sajo saman.

mann


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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2012, 08:21:28 AM »
aapki nazm ke ehsaas gehre hain mann.mann ji
magar hume lagta hai ki aap apne kuch ehsaason ko express nhi kar saki--
aapki nazm aur bhi khoob ho sakti thi--
aapki pehle ki post se hum jaan gaye hain ki aapme drd par likhne ki bht hi khoob kabiliyat hai.
ek achi aur sachchi kosis par dili daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
god bless u
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2012, 08:27:46 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2012, 09:52:48 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2012, 12:42:45 PM »
shukriya qalbji

yun hi sath dete rahiyega
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2012, 04:02:52 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2012, 02:53:22 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Mann.mann ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2012, 04:38:11 AM »
dhanyawad sarfiraji

shayad aap sach kah rahe hain.. is par ham mehnat nahin kar sake.. sukriya
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2012, 04:50:25 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2012, 08:20:10 AM »
aapko bahut bahut dhanyawad siddiquiji..
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2012, 08:51:47 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Mannji..

Khoobsurat Ehsaas Par Agar Aap isse Ek Leh Mein Utaarte To
Aur Maza Aata..

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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2012, 10:23:05 AM »
aapka bahut bahut shukriya mkvji...
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