SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

by faiiz_76 on October 15, 2007, 04:50:56 PM

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SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSAY WOH
SAYA BHI MERE SANG NAHIN CHALTA

APNAY ANDER HI MAN KO MAAR DIYA
AIK NASOOR KIYON RAHAY GALTA

TU NAHIN PHIR BHI PANIYON PE ABHI
KOHER MAIN AKS AIK HAI JALTA

HIJR TO SERV SA BULAND QAMAT
AUR YEH SHASH JEHAT MAIN HAI PHALTA

ISHQ ROOH E AZEEM KA SAYA
TAN KE TUKRON PE YEH NAHIN PALTA

FAYIIZ TO FUQER KO GUNAH NA BANA
DO JAHAN HAAR KIYON NAHIN TALTA..

FAYIIZ


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Re: SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2007, 07:04:50 PM »

Quote from: "faiiz_76"

BAAHUT KHOOB FAIIZ..UMDA LIKHA HAI AAPNE


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SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2007, 07:33:12 PM »

thanks dear


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SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2007, 08:47:53 PM »

bahut hi accha likha hai aap ne faiiz ... soch gaheri hai.

lab pe muskan jal rahi hai
dil me nasoor hai panapta

aage kya likhun samajh main nahi aarha hai ... will continue...


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SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2007, 08:52:29 PM »

thanks tosha ...thaks for this


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SAR KA SOORAJ BANA HAI JABSE WOH

«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2007, 12:00:40 PM »

Aapki shayari samajne mein thoda waqt lag jata hai...lekin bahut acha likhte hai aap..good going


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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2007, 01:13:16 PM »

thanks ishpreet mujhay aihsas hai keh meray lafz samjhnay main waqt lag jata hai laiken appko pata hai

likhnay walay hi jan saktay hain
lafz likhnay main kiya qayamat hai ..

so please forgive .thanks for ur admiration.i really appreciate that

fayiiz