sar patakta raha

by pritam tripathi on November 22, 2012, 09:49:58 PM
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dewaana bankar main bhatakta raha 
teri ishq me main aisa jalta raha 
milna tha tujhe kisi aur hi dar pr
main kisi aur hi dar pr sar patakta raha
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2012, 02:55:13 AM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on November 22, 2012, 09:49:58 PM
dewaana bankar main bhatakta raha 
teri ishq me main aisa jalta raha 
milna tha tujhe kisi aur hi dar pr
main kisi aur hi dar pr sar patakta raha


bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2012, 03:38:16 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2012, 04:19:26 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2012, 04:53:07 AM »
Bahut Khoob Prasad Ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2012, 04:54:39 AM »
khub kaha Pritam ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2012, 07:31:58 AM »
wonderful.....
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2012, 07:55:54 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2012, 09:12:25 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2012, 01:08:11 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on November 22, 2012, 09:49:58 PM
dewaana bankar main bhatakta raha 
teri ishq me main aisa jalta raha 
milna tha tujhe kisi aur hi dar pr
main kisi aur hi dar pr sar patakta raha


bahut khub,sir
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2012, 02:33:42 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on November 23, 2012, 02:55:13 AM
bahut khoob

Suman ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: November 23, 2012, 02:35:48 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on November 23, 2012, 03:38:16 AM
waah waah
saini ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: November 23, 2012, 02:40:46 PM »
Quote from: prashad on November 23, 2012, 04:19:26 AM
very nice
prasad ji dhanyawad
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«Reply #13 on: November 23, 2012, 02:44:18 PM »
Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 23, 2012, 04:53:07 AM
Bahut Khoob Prasad Ji.....

kaushal ji shukriya janab hauslafzai ke liye
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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2012, 02:45:24 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on November 22, 2012, 09:49:58 PM
dewaana bankar main bhatakta raha 
teri ishq me main aisa jalta raha 
milna tha tujhe kisi aur hi dar pr
main kisi aur hi dar pr sar patakta raha

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