Sath ho chale.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on January 07, 2009, 07:08:59 AM
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Safar-e-zindagi me ek mod par, thehar hum sochne lage
Manzil pe ja rahe hain, ya manzil se door ho chale

Tere dar se jo uthe, apne ghar ke daro deewar ko dekhne lage
Yeh makaan kiska hain, mehmaan apne ghar me ho chale

Teri yado ke sahare bhi, jab hum se roothne lage
Yeh daulat bhi jab khoyee, hum barbaad ho chale

Waiz mere shehar ke, muje maikado se rokne lage
Marzi khuda ki kahiye ya GHAYEL ka hunar rokne wale sath ho chale

         -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2009, 08:02:50 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob Sajid ji...
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2009, 08:37:18 AM »
wah kya baat hai.....gayelji.

barbaad hokar tere dar se jo nikle,jaane maikado ki aur,
saher ke samajdar kahene lage,yeh badnaam rasta hai is raste ko chod.
gayel ki sunkar gum-e-dastaan,
kud bhi gayel hokar SATH HO CHALE.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2009, 10:10:14 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 07, 2009, 08:37:18 AM
wah kya baat hai.....gayelji.

barbaad hokar tere dar se jo nikle,jaane maikado ki aur,
saher ke samajdar kahene lage,yeh badnaam rasta hai is raste ko chod.
gayel ki sunkar gum-e-dastaan,
kud bhi gayel hokar SATH HO CHALE.


Thank You Cara for such a beautiful reply.  Applause
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2009, 10:16:14 AM »
Sajid and Cara

Nice thoughts Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2009, 09:54:27 PM »
nice work SG JEE AND CARA
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2009, 02:48:05 AM »
As usual beautifully written...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2009, 04:25:39 AM »
Thank You very much Rajbir, Pooja and Angel jee.
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2009, 02:11:47 PM »
bahut bahut khoob sajid saheb  Applause Applause
aur bahut ache cara ji.. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2009, 01:36:55 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 08, 2009, 02:11:47 PM
bahut bahut khoob sajid saheb  Applause Applause
aur bahut ache cara ji.. Applause

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Khwaish....
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