Sati Pratha !

by salma786 on January 14, 2009, 04:02:50 PM
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salma786
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Bachpan bhi dekha nahi,
Bandhan me bandh diya,
Samajh bhi aya nahi,
Kab kanyadan kiya!

Pita se pyar na mila,
Pati,Pita saman diya,
Kya khwahish karte khusiyo ki?
Sapno ka balidan kiya!

Ye kaisi pratha purani,
Jo nari se balidan liya,
Mujhe jalti cheeta pe,
Apno ne hi phek diya!
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2009, 04:16:22 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on January 14, 2009, 04:02:50 PM
Bachpan bhi dekha nahi,
Bandhan me bandh diya,
Samajh bhi aya nahi,
Kab kanyadan kiya!

Pita se pyar na mila,
Pati,Pita saman diya,
Kya khwahish karte khusiyo ki?
Sapno ka balidan kiya!

Ye kaisi pratha purani,
Jo nari se balidan liya,
Mujhe jalti cheeta pe,
Apno ne hi phek diya!


Good topic... and emotive lines...
haan pratha purani hai... but aaj bi nari ka balidan hote rehta hai.
kabhi sati ke naam pe, kabhi dehej ke naam pe nari ko agni me
pravesh karna padta hai...  sad7

Andha Rajya Andha Prajaa....
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 04:20:27 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on January 14, 2009, 04:02:50 PM
Bachpan bhi dekha nahi,
Bandhan me bandh diya,
Samajh bhi aya nahi,
Kab kanyadan kiya!

Pita se pyar na mila,
Pati,Pita saman diya,
Kya khwahish karte khusiyo ki?
Sapno ka balidan kiya!

Ye kaisi pratha purani,
Jo nari se balidan liya,
Mujhe jalti cheeta pe,
Apno ne hi phek diya!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ek ek shabd kamaal ka apne apni rachna main piroya hai... wah.. bahoot khoob... bahoot he saralta se apne itne gahre dukh ko ek larri ki tarah piro kar yah kavita banai hai.. bahoot acha laga parr kar... Good creation salma!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2009, 10:00:18 PM »
Wonderful presentation Salma Ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2009, 09:02:39 AM »
Nice....
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salma786
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«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2009, 05:12:17 AM »
Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 04:16:22 PM

Good topic... and emotive lines...
haan pratha purani hai... but aaj bi nari ka balidan hote rehta hai.
kabhi sati ke naam pe, kabhi dehej ke naam pe nari ko agni me
pravesh karna padta hai...  sad7

Andha Rajya Andha Prajaa....


Shukriya Roja sis... thanks for ur addition Thumbs UP
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salma786
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2009, 05:13:39 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on January 14, 2009, 04:20:27 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ek ek shabd kamaal ka apne apni rachna main piroya hai... wah.. bahoot khoob... bahoot he saralta se apne itne gahre dukh ko ek larri ki tarah piro kar yah kavita banai hai.. bahoot acha laga parr kar... Good creation salma!!!! Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Pooja sis .... apko pasand ayi notworthy
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salma786
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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2009, 05:14:19 AM »
Shukriya Rajesh ji
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salma786
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2009, 05:15:29 AM »
Thanks sajid ji
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