Sawaali Ban Aaye...dolly

by dolly on April 21, 2012, 05:21:15 PM
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Zakhm Hanstaa Hai Hamein Bhi Hansaayein
Sar-e-Aam Maujon Ki Doli Bech Aaye

Khwaab Bunne Ki Qawaayad Na Thee Jab
Khwaab Yun Dhule,Aankhein Khalee Kar Aaye

Zehen Mein Basee Yaadein Simat See Gayeen Hain
Kaagzon Par Vo Qawwali Unko Bataaye

Dariyaa Jiski Khatir Vo Bahaa Thaa Kabhee
Hum Usee Ke Darr Ke Ab Sawaali Ban Aaye

Special thanks to sk sir for His Valuable Guidance....Thank You Sir...Usual Smile
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theyash
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2012, 05:35:44 PM »
nice dolly ji...
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2012, 05:42:19 PM »
waah waah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2012, 05:52:29 PM »
Aap ki rachna mein hum aise uljhe ki kya batayei.n
Aisa  to  likhiye  k  sabki  samajh mein  aaye

Dil pe mat lena, main aisa hi hun
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2012, 06:31:56 PM »
ye drd aur ye alfaaz
dil ke kis kone se bahar aai aaj--

bht khoob Dolly Amma--
nice creation
daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2012, 08:30:14 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2012, 10:54:01 PM »
acche ehsaas bayyn kiye hai dolly jee bshut khoob, sise hi likhti rahiye.
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2012, 01:48:03 AM »


Zakhm Hanstaa Hai Hamein Bhi Hansaayein
Sar-e-Aam Maujon Ki Doli Bech Aaye

Khwaab Bunne Ki Qawaayad Na Thee Jab
Khwaab Yun Dhule,Aankhein Khalee Kar Aaye

Zehen Mein Basee Yaadein Simat See Gayeen Hain
Kaagzon Par Vo Qawwali Unko Bataaye

Dariyaa Jiski Khatir Vo Bahaa Thaa Kabhee
Hum Usee Ke Darr Ke Ab Sawaali Ban Aaye

Special thanks to sk sir for His Valuable Guidance....Thank You Sir...Usual Smile
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Nicee & lovely dolly ji Keep writing GOOD
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2012, 03:37:37 AM »
bahut khoob dolly keep it up
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2012, 10:38:36 AM »
bahut khoob , dolly ji.
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dolly
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2012, 01:26:36 PM »
nice dolly ji...

Shukriya aapka theyashjii....Usual Smile
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dolly
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2012, 06:45:25 AM »
waah waah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya injured warriorji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2012, 12:01:34 PM »
Aap ki rachna mein hum aise uljhe ki kya batayei.n
Aisa  to  likhiye  k  sabki  samajh mein  aaye

Dil pe mat lena, main aisa hi hun

Oops kya samajh ni aaya ghanshyamji??...:)hm hindi mein bata dete hain...

Zakhm haste hain hm par...aur hm b hans dete hain zakhmon par...apni khushiyaan hmne bech..di..sapne dekhne ka ab koi koshish nai..saare sapne toote..n aankhein ab khali hain...yaadein ab qawaali ban gayin hai...jiss par sb kuch lutate the uske yahan bheekh maangte hain...

Hop nw u vl understand...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2012, 03:28:28 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2012, 05:33:15 AM »
Waa waa maasi ji bhot khub  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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