@ SAWAL @

by baadal102 on March 12, 2008, 11:39:21 AM

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baadal102

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Jinhe cha.ha tha wo akela chor gaye,
Ankho mai ashqo ka sailab chor gaye,

Umar bhar ke liye gum chor gaye,
Dil mai lakho tufan chor gaye,

Rahon mai suna.pan chor gaye,
zindgee mai apna intzaar chor gaye,

Ankho mai ashqo ka sailab chor gaye,
Khata kya thi wo sawal chor gaye..........

tearyeyed

Baadal


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punam

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Re: @ SAWAL @

«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2008, 11:56:48 AM »

wah ji bahot khoob...


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punam

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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2008, 12:24:29 PM »

Main bhi kuch likhne ki kosish ki hun baadal ji..pata nahi kaisa lagega aap ko...

usi ki yaad me aaj bhi khoyi hun
jo yaad de kar chala gaya..

usi ke gham me aansoo bahati hun
jo aaj rooth ke chala gaya...

dil hamesha sada use deta hai
jo aaj dur chala gaya...

mujhe kya pata tha khuda mere naseeb me
uska naam likhna he bhool gaya..


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Roja

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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2008, 01:22:31 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on March 12, 2008, 11:39:21 AM

Baadal

bahut khoob... (magar kisne diya naino main ashq?)


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honeyrose

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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2008, 01:24:04 PM »

Bohat acha likha hai baadal ji
Bohat acha likha hai punam dear..


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Roja

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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2008, 01:25:10 PM »

Quote from: punam on March 12, 2008, 12:24:29 PM

wah wah very good touchy lines Punam... Keep up.


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baadal102

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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2008, 03:21:04 PM »

thanx a lot punam,roja & honey ji

Baadal


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Pooja

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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2008, 03:21:55 PM »

bahoot khoob baadal ji and Punam


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Talat

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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2008, 03:42:52 PM »

Bohot khoob Badal and Punam


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baadal102

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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2008, 03:44:14 PM »

thanx pooja & talat ji

Baadal


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Shikha12

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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2008, 06:18:32 AM »

Nice Work Baadal and Punam


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2008, 06:24:34 AM »

Bahoot achhe badal and punam ji.....Dard ko achhe se bayaan kiya baadal ji aapne.....our punam ji apke jawaab maiNbhi ek kashish hai.....bahoot achhe.....great work

harash


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Pooja

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«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2008, 02:35:11 PM »

Apne hi sawalo mai gheer jaati hu
Na jaane kyun roj khud ko tadpaati hu
Jin sawalo ka jawab na mila barso se
Kyun unhe khud mai dohraye jaati hu

Daste hai sawal, ansoo hi sirf paati hu
Na jaane kin jawabo ke liye, her roj khud ko rulati hu
Khud ki rooh se khud ko ghayal kiye jaati hu
Her roj wo hi sawal, wo hi sawal, khud mai dohrati hu..........