Sawalat Kahun.......................................................raji

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Aj socha hai ki tumse dil ki wo baat kahun,
Jo hai tute hue is dil ke, haalat kahun.

Kitne saare kisse hain, kuchh adhure se,
Samajh nahi aata kaun sa, afsana-e-shuruat kahun.

Main nahi samajh saka, tum samajh lo shayad,
Kaun hai aur jis se apne yeh, zajbat kahun.

Suna hai jante ho tum, harek dil ki baat,
Kaya zaruri hai ki main dil ki, harek baat kahun.

Koi umeed nahi, koi rah nazar nahi aati,
Kiyun hai aise'raji', kisse yeh sawalt kahun.
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2015, 12:58:42 PM »
Aj socha hai ki tumse dil ki wo baat kahun,
Jo hai tute hue is dil ke, haalat kahun.

Kitne saare kisse hain, kuchh adhure se,
Samajh nahi aata kaun sa, afsana-e-shuruat kahun.

Main nahi samajh saka, tum samajh lo shayad,
Kaun hai aur jis se apne yeh, zajbat kahun.

Suna hai jante ho tum, harek dil ki baat,
Kaya zaruri hai ki main dil ki, harek baat kahun.

Koi umeed nahi, koi rah nazar nahi aati,
Kiyun hai aise'raji', kisse yeh sawalt kahun.



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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2015, 01:03:47 PM »
Aj socha hai ki tumse dil ki wo baat kahun,
Jo hai tute hue is dil ke, haalat kahun.

Kitne saare kisse hain, kuchh adhure se,
Samajh nahi aata kaun sa, afsana-e-shuruat kahun.

Main nahi samajh saka, tum samajh lo shayad,
Kaun hai aur jis se apne yeh, zajbat kahun.

Suna hai jante ho tum, harek dil ki baat,
Kaya zaruri hai ki main dil ki, harek baat kahun.

Koi umeed nahi, koi rah nazar nahi aati,
Kiyun hai aise'raji', kisse yeh sawalt kahun.



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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2015, 07:00:13 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2015, 07:16:44 PM »
behad khubsurat raji ji daaaaaaaaaaaddddddddd
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2015, 07:39:00 PM »
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause bahut khub
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2015, 03:20:16 AM »
Aj socha hai ki tumse dil ki wo baat kahun,
Jo hai tute hue is dil ke, haalat kahun.

Kitne saare kisse hain, kuchh adhure se,
Samajh nahi aata kaun sa, afsana-e-shuruat kahun.

Main nahi samajh saka, tum samajh lo shayad,
Kaun hai aur jis se apne yeh, zajbat kahun.

Suna hai jante ho tum, harek dil ki baat,
Kaya zaruri hai ki main dil ki, harek baat kahun.

Koi umeed nahi, koi rah nazar nahi aati,
Kiyun hai aise'raji', kisse yeh sawalt kahun.

bahut khoobsurat Raji Sahib. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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Ek suggestion hai, your words that rhyme are baat, haalaat, shuruaat, jazbaat & swaalaat,  that is the way they sound and are spelled.
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2015, 07:29:16 AM »
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bahut khub rajiji.........
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2015, 12:04:39 PM »
bahut khoobsurat Raji Sahib. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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Ek suggestion hai, your words that rhyme are baat, haalaat, shuruaat, jazbaat & swaalaat,  that is the way they sound and are spelled.
Thanks for the suggestion.Will try to be careful in future
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2015, 01:10:30 PM »
bahut achhaa sachhaa
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