Saza de....... manjum

by manjum on April 04, 2011, 07:27:28 AM

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manjum

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Ya to Maaf kar ya saza de.
Yun gair to na bata de.

Maine chaha na tha dard dena tujhe,
Koun ab dard ki dawa de.

Yesi duniyan jahan se lauta na jae,
Esi duniyan ka pata de.

Tere sath ke kabil nahin hai "mann"
Isko veerane main basa de.

manju "mann"


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2011, 07:35:08 AM »

hmmm……
badhiya hai


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2011, 07:43:36 AM »

acha likha manjum ji ,

JIS DUNYA MEIN DARD HAI MAIN USKA BASHINDA HOON,
ROOH TO MAR CHUKI HAI JISM SE ZINDA HOON ,


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2011, 07:45:37 AM »

aacha lkiha he manju ji........esa mahsus hua padkar ki kuch dil me chupe adhure ehsaas baya hue he .........apki ye poetry padkar specialy first para padkar jagjit singh ji ki wo gazal yaad aa gayi......jisme ye para tha

saja de sila de bana de mita de
maga wo koi failsa to suna de

agar hum kahe aur wo muskra de
kadmo me unke jaha ko luta de


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2011, 08:01:49 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya saahilji....

sath rahie....


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2011, 08:03:38 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya metrixji....

hunnn... ehsas to wese hi hain jaise aapki batai ghazal ke hain....

shukriya sath rahie..


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2011, 08:16:45 AM »

Quote from: manjum on April 04, 2011, 07:27:28 AM

Anju Ji, har Lafz Apne hisse ki dastaan kehta hua..

humesha ki tarah aapne jazbaaton ko lafzon mein bahut khoobsurti se utaara hai..bahut khoooooob

Saahil Ji, bahut Khoob Sher Arz Kiya Hai Aapne


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2011, 08:20:49 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

bas aap sab ka hausala hai.....

yun hi sath rahiega........


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2011, 08:38:16 AM »

SAANSEIN CHALTI THI JAB TO DIL NE SATH CHORH DIYA ,
DIL LAGAYA TO DILBAR NE DIL TORH DIYA,

HUMSAFAR BANKAR CHALEY HI THEY KE BEECH RASTEY MEIN SATH CHORH DIYA ,

KYA SATH DENGE HUM APKA HUMNE TO KHUD SE HI APNA NAATA TORH DIYA


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2011, 12:31:22 PM »

bht bht khoob manju ji...


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Re: Saza de....... manjum

«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2011, 03:19:25 PM »

Quote from: manjum on April 04, 2011, 07:27:28 AM

bahut umdaa soch ke saath kahe gaye hai ehsaas ... Manjum Ji !
sabhi ashaar khuch kehte hai ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !