SEENE SE MERE

by rajrishi on March 16, 2007, 11:06:19 AM
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SEENE SE MERE DIL KO NIKALO,
 KHATA IS NE KI HAI ISE MAAR DALO.

 NAHIN YAAD AAYA WOH KITNE DINO SE,
 ZAKHMON PE MERE JARA NAMAK DALO.

 PILADI KISI NE KASAM USKI DE KAR,
 AGAR HO SAKE TO MUJKO SAMMBALO.

 DIL KO MERE AB AUR DARD DO NA,
 BAS BHI KARO MERE KHAWBO KHAYALO.

 ROYEA KAROGE TUM YAAD MUJHE KAR KE,
 'RAJ' KO USKA DEEWANA KEHNE WALO.
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paani
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2007, 12:12:40 PM »
nice one rarishi...
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2007, 01:40:52 PM »
wah, wah, wah.... full of emotions and very touching poem!!

cheekh si nikal jaati hai
per kisi ko sunaai nahi deti

barasati hai nadia ankon se
boond si hai magar, dikhai deti

dil ka dhadkana, ab lagta nahi acha
magar na dhadke to, wo dikhai nahi deti

ajeeb haal hai, kuch samjh nahi atta
hansi mai rona, rone mai hansi,
khud ki baat khud ko sunaai nahi deti
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2007, 01:42:56 PM »
Apki yah lines bahoot hi achi lagi rajrishi ji

NAHIN YAAD AAYA WOH KITNE DINO SE,
ZAKHMON PE MERE JARA NAMAK DALO.

bahoot khoob!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2007, 12:41:35 PM »
nice raj ji..aur pooja didi!!!

 :D
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rajrishi
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2007, 11:30:27 AM »
Thanks Pooja, meena and paani

     aapne jo is nacheez ki is koshish ko saraha is ke liye Shukriya Aur pooja ji apne jo likha sahi mein shabad nahin hain mere paas taarif ko, bahut khoob
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2007, 11:38:28 AM »
bahoot khood raj & pooja Di
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rajrishi
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2007, 02:04:03 PM »
Gam-ae-zindgi ke saaye mein jiye jaata hoon,
  Kisi  ki  yaad  ko  sang  liye  jaata  hoon.

  Woh aayeinge kabhi mehfil mein hamari,
  isi aarzoo mein shamma jalaye jata hoon.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2007, 03:41:55 PM »
shama bujh gai, umeend abhi bhi zinda hai
koi unse kah de, is lash main ek armaan zinda hai
khayal mit gaye, khawab toot gaye sare
doobati sanso main, ek saans abhi zinda hai
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2007, 05:26:16 PM »
Nice one rajshri and pooja di Usual Smile

Ek chhoti si koshish..

Hazaron zakhm dil mein dabe hue hai,
ashqon ke marham inpe sadiyonse lage hue hai,
sochte hai aakhir kyon na asar hua marham ka,
ab khayal aaya ashq bhi namak se bhare hue hai...
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2007, 03:24:03 AM »
Wah wah Rajshri and Pooja di good going ... keep up
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rajrishi
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2007, 10:33:52 AM »
Nice one Pooja ji and angel ji and thanks Roja,
 
   Kuch aage youn bhi hai,

   Koi ban na jaye is dil ka humraaj,
   Sare hi aansoo shabdon mein piroe jata hoon.
   Kabhi to hogi kismat meherba 'Raj'
   Is tamana mein khud ko mitae jata hoon.
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Roja
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2007, 12:34:58 PM »
Quote from: "rajrishi"
Nice one Pooja ji and angel ji and thanks Roja,
 
   Kuch aage youn bhi hai,

   Koi ban na jaye is dil ka humraaj,
   Sare hi aansoo shabdon mein piroe jata hoon.
   Kabhi to hogi kismat meherba 'Raj'
   Is tamana mein khud ko mitae jata hoon.



Good very good Raj..

Chot lagati hai mehboob ko, dard mujhe hota hai
Ashq behte hai unke to dil mera bhi rota hai

Jhooti mohabbat karne wale bhala kya janenge
Ki sacchi mohabbat main kabhi yeh bhi hota hai..!!

 :lol:
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sanya310
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2007, 12:50:53 PM »
bohot khoob.. sabhi ne boht acha likha hai..
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rajrishi
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2007, 01:40:58 PM »
lajawab Roja ji bahut badiya,

       Jo mohabbat na samje woh aashiq hi kya,

               Jo chahat na ssamje woh mashooq hi kya,
 
      Youn to hoti hai mohabbat sabhi ko par,

               Jisme dard na ho woh ISHQ hi kya.
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