Seh Chuka Hoon Main Apne MuQaddar Ke Dukh...

by Aryaan on May 25, 2005, 06:04:34 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3 4
Print
Author  (Read 4605 times)
Aryaan
Guest
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare

Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare

Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare

Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare

Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Madhosh Ho chuka Hoon main by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
Main bhool chuka hoon.....................................Rajan Kondal by RAJAN KONDAL in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
Meena
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2005, 06:12:04 PM »
"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare "


beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
Logged
Aryaan
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2005, 03:14:48 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare "


beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D

Bohat shukriya Meena.....
Logged
fakharenaveed
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2005, 03:34:48 AM »
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain
Logged
Aryaan
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2005, 03:36:24 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain

Wah Naveed Bohat khoob...
Logged
fakharenaveed
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2005, 03:46:56 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain

Wah Naveed Bohat khoob...
Thanx Aryaan.............................
Logged
isha_verma7
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2005, 05:39:04 AM »
wow aryaan these lines just WONDERFUL"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare"
Logged
isha_verma7
Guest
«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2005, 05:42:59 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain


Wah Naveed kya baat........ek dam sahi kahaa.......i agree w/ every single line
Logged
fakharenaveed
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2005, 10:16:30 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain


Wah Naveed kya baat........ek dam sahi kahaa.......i agree w/ every single line
Thanx isha sweety.......................................
Logged
jalpari
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2005, 04:08:57 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare

Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare

Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare

Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare

Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare

Ones again Aryaan..Bohat ache...
Logged
Aryaan
Guest
«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2005, 12:47:40 PM »
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................
Logged
fakharenaveed
Guest
«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2005, 09:57:25 PM »
Unko bhar ka bahon mein,
Dil se dil ko chu kar pyar se,
Kareeb iss kadar aaunga main,
Lab chu lunga lab se apne yaar ke.
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2005, 08:54:20 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................


 :wink:
Logged
sandhaya
Guest
«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2005, 08:58:08 AM »
kya baat hai ........Aryaan ji
and nice work by all...............

hasrate dil ki dil main hi reh gai hai sayad
ki aabh tuh koi ehsaash nahi hota hai mujhe

dard itna mila hai mujhe mere apno se
ki abh tuh dusmaan bhi lagte hai apno ki tarah mujhe
Logged
Aryaan
Guest
«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2005, 05:53:56 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................


 :wink:

 :D
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3 4
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 22, 2024, 09:08:41 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.104 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer