Seh Chuka Hoon Main Apne MuQaddar Ke Dukh...

by Aryaan on May 25, 2005, 06:04:34 PM
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Aryaan
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«Reply #15 on: May 28, 2005, 05:55:26 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai ........Aryaan ji
and nice work by all...............

hasrate dil ki dil main hi reh gai hai sayad
ki aabh tuh koi ehsaash nahi hota hai mujhe

dard itna mila hai mujhe mere apno se
ki abh tuh dusmaan bhi lagte hai apno ki tarah mujhe

Thank you Sandhaya.....& Nice One.....
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nikki
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«Reply #16 on: May 28, 2005, 06:01:30 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare

Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare

Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare

Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare

Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare


again a good one Aryaan ji....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #17 on: May 28, 2005, 06:47:13 PM »
Thanks a lot Nikki..........................
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: May 28, 2005, 07:00:38 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare

Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare

Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare

Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare

Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare


Wow Aryaan...very touchinf esp. these two shers :

Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare

Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare

Really very nice !!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #19 on: May 28, 2005, 07:03:12 PM »
Bohat shukriya Talat........

Ruka huwa tha mera saans mere seene mein
Usay gale na lagata tau ghut ke marr jaata
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Talat
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«Reply #20 on: May 28, 2005, 07:21:25 PM »
Nice Aryaan ...

Saansen bhi ruk ruk kar aati hain
In ankhon se nami nahin jaati hai
qadam bojhil, raaste hain uljhe se
koi manzil nazar ab nahin aat hai
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Aryaan
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«Reply #21 on: May 28, 2005, 07:24:59 PM »
Bohat achey Talat....

Ab to zabt-e-gham ne pather kar diya warna Faraz
Dekhta koi ke dil ke zakhm jab aankhon mein they[/color]
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Talat
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«Reply #22 on: May 28, 2005, 07:31:05 PM »
Thanks Aryaan n Good one again....

mohabbat main apni hume pathar bana gaya hai wo shakhs
pathraayi aankhon main lekin kuch khwaab hain rehne diye !!!
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #23 on: May 28, 2005, 07:59:21 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Aryaan n Good one again....

mohabbat main apni hume pathar bana gaya hai wo shakhs
pathraayi aankhon main lekin kuch khwaab hain rehne diye !!!
buhat khoob
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Aryaan
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«Reply #24 on: May 28, 2005, 10:30:22 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Aryaan n Good one again....

mohabbat main apni hume pathar bana gaya hai wo shakhs
pathraayi aankhon main lekin kuch khwaab hain rehne diye !!!

Bohat khoob Talat.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #25 on: May 28, 2005, 10:32:32 PM »
Hum Gham ko sadayein dete hain
Aur phir bhi labon par Aah nahi
Hum Hanste hain, Zinda rehte hain
Par Jeene ki koi Chaah nahi
Hum dhoondh rahe hain manzil ko
Aur saamne koi Raah nahin
Ab Toote ga ya Sanmbhle ga
Iss Dil ki koi Parwaah nahi....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #26 on: May 28, 2005, 11:51:37 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Hum Gham ko sadayein dete hain
Aur phir bhi labon par Aah nahi
Hum Hanste hain, Zinda rehte hain
Par Jeene ki koi Chaah nahi
Hum dhoondh rahe hain manzil ko
Aur saamne koi Raah nahin
Ab Toote ga ya Sanmbhle ga
Iss Dil ki koi Parwaah nahi....
nice
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Aryaan
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«Reply #27 on: May 29, 2005, 12:35:09 AM »
Thanks Naveed.................................
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #28 on: May 29, 2005, 12:55:48 AM »
You welcome.................

hzaroon ghum miltey hain is rah e safar mein
phir bhi log kiun isi pe jntay huwe chltay hain
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Aryaan
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«Reply #29 on: May 29, 2005, 01:03:10 AM »
Nice one Naveed....

Rait Ki Tarha Hath Se, Nikalti Chali Gayi
Zindagi Harr Lamha, Badalti Chali Gayi
Aziz They Mujhe Apne Asool Lekin Na Jaane Kyun
Naye Daur Ke Dhaanche Mein Yeh Dhalti Chali Gayi
Sehar Hone Pe Bhi Chraagh Woh Bhujne Nahi Deta
Idhar Main, Udhar Woh Shamma Bhi Jalti Cahli Gayi
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