Seh gaye unke sitam

by NewYorker on December 29, 2004, 06:47:47 PM
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Sunsaan rah main, akela chode gaye
Jindagi saath nibhane ka, Waada tode gaye...

kuch keh na paye, ankhen dekhati rahi unke karam
apna naseeb samjh kar, seh gaye unke sitam...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2004, 07:10:34 PM »
Bohat khoob..
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2004, 07:48:32 PM »
nice!

 :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2004, 08:30:16 PM »
setaam dahana to unhoney apni ada benali,
beach majdhar mey chood key janey ki ek ada benali,
her ke naye suraj key sath naya peymana chahalakta hai,
teyrey door janey sey meyra dil bahoot rota hia.
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NewYorker
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2004, 08:43:16 PM »
good one... Usual Smile
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Namkeen
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2004, 08:45:23 PM »
very nice nyjee

Kaanch ke tukade hua ye mann........
Raah dekhti rahi mein abhaagan.......
Saaraa jag aayaa gayaa par.........
Aaye na humare sanam........
seh gaye hum unke sitam........
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Sonu
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2004, 02:26:16 AM »
shukriya new yorker ji by the new york kha per hia app mey bhi new york mey hee hoon veysey apka shub nam ager app batna nahi chatey to its ok new yorker ji...

keep it up good work...Usual Smile
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arzoo
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«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2004, 05:31:12 AM »
good job namkeen...

sitam sehna aadat bana li ab humne
koi shikva na koi shikayat rahi ab unse
kerte hai jodne ki koshish es dil ko
jo tukde-tukde hua kaanch ke jase
fir bhi lage hai us surat ko dekhne me
jo ab aati hai dundli si, es dil ke sheeshe me...
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2004, 10:22:47 AM »
wah wah all Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2004, 10:36:58 AM »
Quote from: "arzoo"
good job namkeen...

sitam sehna aadat bana li ab humne
koi shikva na koi shikayat rahi ab unse
kerte hai jodne ki koshish es dil ko
jo tukde-tukde hua kaanch ke jase
fir bhi lage hai us surat ko dekhne me
jo ab aati hai dundli si, es dil ke sheeshe me...


wah!!!!!!!!!!!  very nice......all..............bahot khoob..........

Chodo Ahad-E-Wafa Ki Batain Kyun Jhootey Ikrar Karen
Kal Main Bhi Sharminda Hunga' Kal Tum Bhi Pachhtaoge................
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diva
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2004, 04:48:45 PM »
meine kahan jo unse thukrake chal na  zalim
hairat mein aake bole ," kya aap jee rahe hai ?"
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