shaam dhalte hi!!!

by ranjana on October 28, 2006, 04:05:10 AM
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ranjana
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yeh kaun yaad aa gaya shaam dhalte hi
uska khayaal kyu sataata hai shaam dhalate hi

mehek jaata hai saara alam unki khushboo se
chaand bhi chamak jaat hai aankho mein shaam dhlate hi

saj rahi hai sitaaro ki chunar jaise mere aanchal mein
saja leta hai koi khawaab aankho mein shaam dhalate hi

mera naam lete hi us ke chehare per uth jaati hain zamaane ki nigaahe
woh apne geeto mein gunguna lete mera naam shaam dhalate hi
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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2006, 04:44:49 AM »
oye itne dino baad.   kaya baat hai bahut accha likha ranjana ji ne......


Intezar karte rahe hum tere aane ka
Tu to naa aya par aagayi  raat tanhaai ki
Koi shikayat na koi shikwa karenge
Tu bhale na aaye par tera intezaar karenge
Hum tere aane ki har pal dua karenge
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2006, 04:56:29 AM »
Ranju sis bahut khoob..

Vicky ji javab nahi apka bhi.. bahut acha likhtey hu...


Samja do apni yado ko,
wo bin bulaye pas aaya karti hai,
aap to dur rehkar satate ho magar,
wo pas aakar rulaya karti hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2006, 08:21:56 AM »
shukriya ....sonu .....vikas ......bahut khoob likha hai aap dono ne....


aaj khud ko unki yaado se tahah karke dekhe
aa zindagi aaj unke bagair bhi jee ke dekhe

kuch kahi nazar aa jaaye ab unke siva
chalo aaj aaiene mein apna aqs hum bhi dekhe

kehte hain woh ki pyaar karte hain hame tut kar
aaj jara unke pyaar ko ajama ke bhi dekhe

har pal dard ke kisse bhi sunaaye hum kis tarah unko
aaj thoda muskara ke apne dard ko chipa kar dekhe
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2006, 05:46:16 PM »
suni hai har pal ek pukaar maine
wohi tere dil ki sada toh nahi

kabhi dhal jaata hai tere lafazo mein geet mera
kahi yeh tere mere dil se nikala koi dard toh nahi

bahut chaha hamne ki na palat ke de aavaaz tujhko
per tumne kabhi pass aane se mujhe roka hi nahi

kabhi jhaank ke dil mein dekh apne
kahi yah fasaana teri meri haqikat toh nahi !!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2006, 05:57:13 PM »
mohabbat ki haqikat to bas sirf judai hai,
yeh jana hai humne jab dil pe choot khayi hai!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2006, 06:13:44 PM »
awesome./.......  Meena.....  Ranajana.....  sonu......
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Meena is back
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2006, 06:24:48 PM »
thanx waheed! :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2006, 12:01:30 AM »
good job ranju ji, meenu, sonu and vikas ji
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2006, 03:24:18 AM »
shukriya Ranju sis... bahut khoob sis....

Aansuo mein raatbhar rona pada ,
Tere milan se to haath dhona pada ,
Tera milna tha khwaab mera
Khwaab laane ke liye sona pada…


Quote from: "ranjana"
shukriya ....sonu .....vikas ......bahut khoob likha hai aap dono ne....


aaj khud ko unki yaado se tahah karke dekhe
aa zindagi aaj unke bagair bhi jee ke dekhe

kuch kahi nazar aa jaaye ab unke siva
chalo aaj aaiene mein apna aqs hum bhi dekhe

kehte hain woh ki pyaar karte hain hame tut kar
aaj jara unke pyaar ko ajama ke bhi dekhe

har pal dard ke kisse bhi sunaaye hum kis tarah unko
aaj thoda muskara ke apne dard ko chipa kar dekhe
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2006, 03:25:16 AM »
thanks waheed...

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
awesome./.......  Meena.....  Ranajana.....  sonu......
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2006, 03:28:52 AM »
meenu ki gal ahi kudiyeh javab nahi teyra.... badey dinaa baadh vikhi hia...  bahut sohna likhya hia....

Zindagi jaise ek sazaa si ho gai hai ,
Gum ke sagar mein is kadar kho gai hai ,
Tum aa jaao vapis yeh gujaarish hai meri ;
Shaayad muje, Tumhaari aadat si ho gai hai…



Quote from: "Meena is back"
mohabbat ki haqikat to bas sirf judai hai,
yeh jana hai humne jab dil pe choot khayi hai!
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Sonu
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2006, 03:30:48 AM »
pooja sis shukriya...

Quote from: "Pooja"
good job ranju ji, meenu, sonu and vikas ji
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Meena is back
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2006, 09:30:38 AM »
thank u pooja sis and sonu. nce one as well!

 :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2006, 03:50:03 PM »
meenuu r most welcome......and  thanks...

Quote from: "Meena is back"
thank you pooja sis and sonu. nce one as well!

 :D
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