~@~SHAAM SALONI SI~@`

by deepika_divya on March 17, 2007, 10:16:20 AM
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Ak Shaam Saloni Si
Rangeen fizaao ka chader Hode Hui thi..

Har tarf andera tha,
khamoshi si chai hui thi.

Dil ne kuch kehna cha,
Sard hawaye bhi kuch sunne ko ruk gai thi.

Zuban bebas hui, aur ankhe,
Dard -e- judai ka Kissa keh gai thi.

kuch lamha yaad aaya mujhe,
Labo pe bhi halki si miuskarahat thi.

Ak sapno ki duniya thi,
jahan teri ruh ko meri ruh mein pana mili thi.

Ak diya jal raha tha,
Lohh apni betabi jata rahi thi.

Hawao ne bhi gungunana Shuru kiya,
Ak aisi raat saji thi.

Raat raani ki khusbu se mehka tha aalam
us raat main tere pyar mein khub saji thi.

mausam ne khol raki apni bahen,
us raat tere sang maine sapno ki duniya buni thi.

phir ak Aahat si hui, main sapno ki duniya chod
Hakkikat mein aa khadi hui thi.

Ak shaam thi saloni si
Rangeen fizao ka chadar hode hui thi.
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2007, 05:37:37 AM »
Mind Blowing Divya...Really i like it... Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2007, 10:46:05 AM »
thankx Gaurav.. for liking it.
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Meena is back
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2007, 12:29:01 PM »
nice deepika kuddiye!!!!

beegh jate hai palkiyan, behte hai lakhon ashk,
jab tut kar sapne chubne lagte hai ankhon me,
roota hai dil, bulata hai dil ek shaks ko,
jo kho gaya kahi bewafai ki rahon me!!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2007, 04:15:18 AM »
tahnks meena ji... bade dino baad aapka deedar hua hai.. aur mere thread mea aap aai uske liye shukriya.. thanks for liking it.
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2007, 01:01:30 PM »
hi Deepika... han ji mai kafi der baad ayi yaha pe... its nice to c all of u guys and all the creations!! keep it up!!! Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2007, 04:13:50 AM »
thanks Meena ji ...
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2007, 10:18:13 PM »
Divs...bohot achcha likha hai Usual Smile

Meena nice to se you after a long time Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2007, 02:44:01 PM »
Wahh...main to padhte padhte ekdam kho hi gayi thi..lol.bohat acha likha hahi divya Usual Smile .

and nice 2 c u meena sis after such a long time/
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2007, 04:47:51 AM »
Thank U Talat Di & Nidhi.... Thanks u so much..
Its poetry mein such much kuch ehsaas hai jo mujhe akk platform tak le gaya tha,.....

Thanks once again
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2008, 11:54:54 AM »
gar chahat ha humsa to jatata ku nahi
kissa darta ho bata ta ku nahi
gar halat dil ki labo sa bayan nahi kar sakta to
apni sanso ki khushbu sa pagam bijwata ku nahi
barso sa ha intzar aap ki chahat ka
gar chahat nahi humsa to inkar kat\rta ku nahi
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2008, 11:55:31 AM »
nice poem
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2008, 11:56:09 AM »
it really very beautiful
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2008, 12:00:14 PM »
really nice poem
Ak Shaam Saloni Si
Rangeen fizaao ka chader Hode Hui thi..

Har tarf andera tha,
khamoshi si chai hui thi.

:heart: Dil ne kuch kehna cha,
Sard hawaye bhi kuch sunne ko ruk gai thi.

Zuban bebas hui, aur ankhe,
Dard -e- judai ka Kissa keh gai thi.

kuch lamha yaad aaya mujhe,
Labo pe bhi halki si miuskarahat thi.

Ak sapno ki duniya thi,
jahan teri ruh ko meri ruh mein pana mili thi.

Ak diya jal raha tha,
Lohh apni betabi jata rahi thi.

Hawao ne bhi gungunana Shuru kiya,
Ak aisi raat saji thi.

Raat raani ki khusbu se mehka tha aalam
us raat main tere pyar mein khub saji thi.

mausam ne khol raki apni bahen,
us raat tere sang maine sapno ki duniya buni thi.

phir ak Aahat si hui, main sapno ki duniya chod
Hakkikat mein aa khadi hui thi.

Ak shaam thi saloni si
Rangeen fizao ka chadar hode hui thi.
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