Shaan se nikale... manjum

by manjum on May 06, 2011, 05:58:26 AM
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Teer kitne juban se nikale.
Jaise khanzar mayaan se nikale.

Ek pal ko hame apna na kaha,
Gair ho kar jahan se nikale.

Ye samandar na paar kar paye,
Ham bhi kis imtihan se nikale.

Maut ho ya ke zindgi ka safar,
Jab bhi nikle hain shan se nikale.

Sath jo tere din guzare the,
Bade aman-o-amaan se nikale.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2011, 06:18:57 AM »
gud
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2011, 07:18:08 AM »
shukriya niralaji... bahut samay ke baad aap dikhai diye... kahan hai???
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2011, 07:26:28 AM »
hum nai aate ab……
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2011, 07:28:28 AM »
kya narazgi hai hamse.....
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2011, 07:46:25 AM »
bohut khoob manju ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2011, 07:48:28 AM »
bahut shukriya saahilji
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2011, 08:00:36 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 06, 2011, 07:28:28 AM
kya narazgi hai hamse.....
naraazgi kis bat ki!!!
kuch jada hi dil lag gaya tha yaha…
usse hi dur ja rha hu
yani ke dil se dur apnepan se dur khud se dur Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2011, 08:24:29 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 06, 2011, 05:58:26 AM
Teer kitne juban se nikale.
Jaise khanzar mayaan se nikale.

Ek pal ko hame apna na kaha,
Gair ho kar jahan se nikale.

Ye samandar na paar kar paye,
Ham bhi kis imtihan se nikale.

Maut ho ya ke zindgi ka safar,
Jab bhi nikle hain shan se nikale.

Sath jo tere din guzare the,
Bade aman-o-amaan se nikale.

manju "mann"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Anjuji..

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2011, 08:46:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

sath rahiega.......
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2011, 08:49:43 AM »
niralaji.. esa mt kahie... ham sab ka dil bhi to kag gaya hai aap main.... rahie hamare paas
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2011, 09:14:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji...

sath rahiega...
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2011, 09:35:15 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 06, 2011, 08:49:43 AM
niralaji.. esa mt kahie... ham sab ka dil bhi to kag gaya hai aap main.... rahie hamare paas
dil ko lagana hi bura hai…
chhoti chhoti bato par dukhi ho jata h ye dil…
islie dur rahunga kuch din to mera bi aur aap sb ka bi wo lgaw khatm ho jayega…
aur esa hi hota h…
kuch din me sbkuch bhul jati h ye duniya…
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2011, 09:39:12 AM »
Manjum jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne Manjum jee aapke waah ....  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...

Behad umdaa ahsaas O khayaal aur utni hi umdaa bayaani Usual Smile Clapping Smiley

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate haiN Usual Smile

Quote from: manjum on May 06, 2011, 05:58:26 AM
Teer kitne juban se nikale.
Jaise khanzar mayaan se nikale.

Kia kahne bahut khoob achcha matla kaha hai daad ...

Ek pal ko hame apna na kaha,
Gair ho kar jahan se nikale.

Bayani behad achchi rahi khayaal bhi achcha hai.. Thoda sher meiN aur improvement ki zarurat hai Usual Smile
Aik khayaal humare zahen meiN bana hai dekhiye aapko kaisa lagta hai...

Ek pal ko hume apna na kahaa
Dum hai ke itminaan se nikle

Ye samandar na paar kar paye,
Ham bhi kis imtihan se nikale.

Kia kahne bahut khoob daad Usual Smile

Maut ho ya ke zindgi ka safar,
Jab bhi nikle hain shan se nikale.

Behad khoob daad Usual Smile

Sath jo tere din guzare the,
Bade aman-o-amaan se nikale.

Kia kahne waah jee waah daad daad daad Usual Smile Applause Applause Applause
manju "mann"

Manjum jee aapki kalaam ki dhaar aur ahsaas o khayaal ka bunaao kafi achcha raha..

Aise hi umdaa kalaam likhati rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2011, 10:06:54 AM »
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Khush rahiye..!
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