shabd kho gaye

by Pooja on September 04, 2007, 10:32:49 PM
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Pooja
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Ajj koi Dard mehsoos nahi hota
Kyun koi jakham ajj nahi hai rota
Ajeeb sannatta hai mere charo taraf
Koi hungama is dil mai nahi hota

Unse mil kar kahna tha bahoot kuch dil ko
Magar in shabdo main, wo arth nahi hota
Aaj hai jo, likh likh k dil pe roti rahun ..
Aur ab to hale dil bhi kaghaz pe tamir nahi hota
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2007, 01:05:14 AM »
Bohat khoob Pooja...
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2007, 05:21:40 PM »
Shukaria Aryaan ji!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2007, 07:56:28 PM »
Bahut achha pooja di Usual Smile
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ISHPREET
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2007, 08:37:40 PM »
bahut ache pooja...

dil se roye magar honton se muskura baithe
yuhi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
woh humein ek lamha na de paaye
jinke liye hum apni zindagi gavah baithe
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2007, 04:29:51 AM »
bahoot khoob Pooja Di.. realy good one

bahhot khoob Ishpreet...
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sanya310
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2007, 11:25:47 AM »
nice one pooja//
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2007, 04:47:07 PM »
Thanks Angle, Ishpreet, divya and Sanya!!

Kalam chup, shabd kahin kho gaye
lagta hai Pooja ke shayri ke din poore ho gaye!!! sad5
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2007, 07:12:15 PM »
:O aisa kyon likha aapne?Huh?Huh???
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2007, 08:55:13 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Thanks Angle, Ishpreet, divya and Sanya!!

Kalam chup, shabd kahin kho gaye
lagta hai Pooja ke shayri ke din poore ho gaye!!! sad5

Bilkul ghalat kaha aap ne Pooja..
 Aapki shayeri ke din khatam nahi, balke aapki shayeri mein tau din ba din nikhaar aa raha hai...
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sanya310
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2007, 02:50:47 PM »
Aryaan ne sahi kaha Pooja..
aisa bilkul mat kehna Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2007, 07:37:37 PM »
bahoot bahoot shularia Aryaan ji and Sanya sath dene ke liye!!

Ajj laga hai shayad kalam phir se sath de rahi ho ...Usual Smile


Dard mai dard ka wo ahsaas hua
Shabdo ka, na kalam ka, koi sath hua
Naata jaise toot gaya ho saanso se
Aor marne ka bhi Na koi ahsaas hua!!

Ajeeb khail waqat khilata rahta hai
Ek putla Jaise yah insaan hua
Jitna chaha ujiyaare ko dil se maine
Utna he andhera meri pehchan hua!!!!
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2007, 07:54:45 PM »
umer guzri issi kasha kash main
yun na hota adam to yun hota ..

pooja app likha karain bohat acha likhti hain .
iss board persab se acha shayad.nd wese bhi young log likhtay rahain to shairee keliye behtar hai..well done
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2008, 10:40:14 PM »
dhoonda karu shabdo ko, kalam ko kuch samjh nahi atta
ek tu gaya zindagi se, mujhse kuch likha nahi jaata
likhati thi tujhse bhi pahle, phir yah samjh mai nahi atta
tere jaane ke baad, kyun phir se mujhse likha nahi jaata!!!
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2008, 07:39:10 PM »
dhoonda karu shabdo ko, kalam ko kuch samjh nahi atta
ek tu gaya zindagi se, mujhse kuch likha nahi jaata
likhati thi tujhse bhi pahle, phir yah samjh mai nahi atta
tere jaane ke baad, kyun phir se mujhse likha nahi jaata!!!


jo gaya he zindgi se- woh laut aayega
kalam mein woh taakat he usko bulaayega
aur fir bhee na aaye toh bhee
tohmat kalam pe na laggana
budnasibi yeh uski hi he
jo 'tujhe' chhod jayega!
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