~~Shama jalti~~ :Shayri-E-Dard

~~yash~~

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Behno Aur bhaiyo.. ... kuch likhne ki jurrat ki hai pls pls pls apne jute chappal ko hath mein mat uthayega aur comments toh bilkul mat di jiyega kyunki i know maine bilkul acha nahi likha aur ache ache shayaro se niwedan hai ke apne ankh kaan bandh karle pls..

Shama jalti rahi hum pighalte rahe
Raat dhalne lagi hum machalte rahe

Ek taraf badalo pe tha chandani ka suroor
Aur yaha karwate hum badalte rahe

Us shabe hijr mein yuh to tanha the hum
Aake palko pe wo sath chalte rahe

Aalame khawab mein kya hua kya kahu
Dhadkane badh gayi hum jijakte rahe

Dekhte dekhte faasle ghat gaye
Sard mausam tha aur hum sulagte rahe

jaanay kab hogayi subah us sapne mein
raat bhar jiski aagoosh mein hum mahekte rahe


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Shikha12

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Re: ~~Shama jalti~~

«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2008, 05:50:33 AM »

But that was a Very Good Effort Yash...
Atleast, I like it.. Usual Smile

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Roja

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Re: ~~Shama jalti~~

«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2008, 05:53:23 AM »

Quote from: ~~yash~~ on February 12, 2008, 10:00:18 PM

Yash ji... bahut umda kalam pesh kiya hai aapne. And aapko yo per swagat hai.Bahut pasand aaya hai... kyu marenge ji hum ?


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~~yash~~

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Re: ~~Shama jalti~~

«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2008, 05:27:52 PM »

shikha ji n roja ji


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Pooja

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Re: ~~Shama jalti~~

«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2008, 05:30:13 PM »

bahoot khoob yash.. full of emotions.. Good creation


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Rajbir

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Re: ~~Shama jalti~~

«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2008, 06:13:39 PM »

Yash

Good effort !

Welcome to Yoindia !


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