Shama Ki Tarah Hum Jalte Rahe Tere Pyaar MeiN..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on December 18, 2012, 04:25:13 PM
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Shama Ki Tarah Hum Jalte Rahe Tere Pyaar MeiN,
Har Raat Katra-Katra Pighalte Rahe Intezaar MeiN..!!

Ek Aag Hai Seene Mein Jo Bujhaaye Nahi Bhujti,
Ro Kar Dekh Liya Zaar-Zaar Humne Aitbaar MeiN..!!

Pareshaan Mere Din, Bechain Ab Meri Raatein HaN,
Khareed Laate Thoda Sukoon Jo Bikta Bazaar MeiN..!!

Kabhi Jeete The Hum Teri Mohabbat Ki Panaah MeiN,
Ab Zindagi Reh Gayi Faqat SaansoN Ki Raftaar MeiN..!!

Khaali Man, Khaali Mera Damaan Hai Tere Bagair,
Lut Gaye Hum Sanam Is Mohabbat Ki Darkaar MeiN..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2012, 05:26:42 PM »
Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2012, 06:05:57 PM »
Shireen Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob.. bade hi khoobsurat ahsaas
o khayaal kahe hai aapne... Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN aik baat kaheNge ab aapne bher meiN likhna chahiye
aapko radiff aur kafiye ka toH achcha ilm ho gaya hai ..
aur aapke ahsaas O khayaal bhi khoob hai jo baqhubi
ashaaroN meiN dhal jaate haiN... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2012, 08:11:14 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah Wah....bahut khoob...
Padhkar Kishi ki yaad aa gayi...
Aise hi Likhte rahiye icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2012, 01:16:42 AM »
bahut khoob shireen ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2012, 03:30:25 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut bahut khoob Shireen ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2012, 04:38:22 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2012, 04:45:22 AM »
Hamesha Ki Tarah Superbbbb Behatreen Lovely Creation Shireen Ji

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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2012, 05:09:00 AM »
Quote from: Shireen Hakani on December 18, 2012, 04:25:13 PM
Shama Ki Tarah Hum Jalte Rahe Tere Pyaar Mein,
Har Raat Katra-Katra Pighalte Rahe Intezaar Mein..!!

wah wah wah !!!

Ek Aag Hai Seene Mein Jo Bujhaaye Nahi Bhujti,
Ro Kar Dekh Liya Zaar-Zaar Humne Aitbaar Mein..!!


Pareshaan Mere Din, Bechain Ab Meri Raatein Hai,
Khareed Laate Thoda Sukoon Jo Bikta Bazaar Mein..!!

wah wah wah

Kabhi Jeete The Hum Teri Mohabbat Ki Panaah Mein,
Ab Zindagi Reh Gayi Fakat Saanson Ki Raftaar Mein..!!

Khaali Man, Khaali Mera Damaan Hai Tere Bagair,
Lut Gaye Hum Sanam Is Mohabbat Ki Darkaar Mein..!!

Shireen Hakani

wah wah shireen ji lajawab
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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2012, 05:14:58 AM »
VERY NICE SHEERIN JI
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«Reply #11 on: December 19, 2012, 11:05:15 AM »
bohat khoob ,...............
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«Reply #12 on: December 19, 2012, 12:36:10 PM »
bahut khoob shireen jee
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