shamshaan nahi hai

by pritam tripathi on December 12, 2012, 04:45:30 PM
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dekha nahi, tune mujhe, zara gaur se dilbar
is duniya me mujhsa koi masoom nahi hai........

kehti rahi, accha bura, tu mujhko hi hamesha
dukh me tere koi aur kaam aaya bhi nahi hai..

kaun kehta hai, duniya me, tujhe khuda na milega
ab talak theek se maine use pukara nahi hai....

jo shama, bujh gayi, hai aandhiyon se ladkar
ab parwaanahon ki dua unke saath nahi hai.........

jis mitti ko, seencha tune, apne pasine se pritam
aaj bastiyan bas gayi wahan shamshan nahi hai......
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 05:02:11 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on December 12, 2012, 04:45:30 PM
dekha nahi, tune mujhe, zara gaur se dilbar
is duniya me mujhsa koi masoom nahi hai........

kehti rahi, accha bura, tu mujhko hi hamesha
dukh me tere koi aur kaam aaya bhi nahi hai..

kaun kehta hai, duniya me, tujhe khuda na milega
ab talak theek se maine use pukara nahi hai....

jo shama, bujh gayi, hai aandhiyon se ladkar
ab parwaanahon ki dua unke saath nahi hai.........

jis mitti ko, seencha tune, apne pasine se pritam
aaj bastiyan bas gayi wahan shamshan nahi hai......








good,sir
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 05:10:16 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on December 12, 2012, 04:45:30 PM
dekha nahi, tune mujhe, zara gaur se dilbar
is duniya me mujhsa koi masoom nahi hai........

kehti rahi, accha bura, tu mujhko hi hamesha
dukh me tere koi aur kaam aaya bhi nahi hai..

kaun kehta hai, duniya me, tujhe khuda na milega
ab talak theek se maine use pukara nahi hai....

jo shama, bujh gayi, hai aandhiyon se ladkar
ab parwaanahon ki dua unke saath nahi hai.........

jis mitti ko, seencha tune, apne pasine se pritam
aaj bastiyan bas gayi wahan shamshan nahi hai......

Bahut khoob likha hai Tripathi jee  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 03:42:37 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 05:01:24 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 06:36:18 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 02:42:15 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2012, 06:52:35 PM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 12, 2012, 05:02:11 PM

good,sir
marhoom ji thanks
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2012, 06:53:08 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on December 12, 2012, 05:10:16 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai Tripathi jee  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
suman ji thanks
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2012, 06:53:42 PM »
Quote from: Aarish on December 13, 2012, 03:42:37 AM
bohut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2012, 06:54:32 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on December 13, 2012, 05:01:24 AM
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2012, 06:55:28 PM »
Quote from: prashad on December 13, 2012, 06:36:18 AM
very nice
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2012, 06:56:21 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on December 13, 2012, 02:42:15 PM
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