Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!! (Shikha) -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: May 09, 2008, 02:34:45 PM »

Thanks Shikha sis.. Usual Smile


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #16 on: July 15, 2008, 10:05:29 AM »

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidikiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

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pahchani si aawazon ka laga hua baazar hai.........
wah ji wah.....kya kahne aapke....itni sunder rachna se door raha....khed hai mujhe.....lekin padhte padhte kitane hi rang aankhon se guzarne lage aur fir se wahi nikla..wah ...wah mahiya


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #17 on: July 19, 2008, 08:09:44 AM »

Hausla Afzaai ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev.. Usual Smile


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2008, 05:18:30 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on January 07, 2008, 10:40:57 AM

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidkiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

1. sharaar = chingaari (spark)
2. chalaava = nazar ka dhokha (illusion)
3. taaviil = lamba aur thakaan bhara (long and tiring)
4. fikar = pareshaani (botheration)

Just wonderful, specially these lines.

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

keep writing.


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2009, 08:50:13 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on January 07, 2008, 10:40:57 AM

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidkiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

1. sharaar = chingaari (spark)
2. chalaava = nazar ka dhokha (illusion)
3. taaviil = lamba aur thakaan bhara (long and tiring)
4. fikar = pareshaani (botheration)

KAAM AHSAAN HO USAY DUSHWAR BANA LAITA HOON
DARD K MAROON KO YAR BANA LAITA HOON
U R A PRO I CAN TELL FROM UR POETRY,MAZA AAH GYA.ASGHR icon_salut


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