Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!! (Shikha) :Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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चारों तरफ खड़ी कशमकश की दीवार है,
खुशियाँ तमाम हमारी, जिसके उस पार है…

तेरी नज़र को आज भी ढूँढती है मेरी नज़र,
राख के ढेर में छुपा, कोई शरार^१ है…

तुम आए थे या, हुआ है ये छलावा^२ सा कोई,
खिड़कियों से दिखाई देता, कैसा गुबार है…

सुनी सुनी सी धुन कहीं, दबी दबी सी कोई आहट,
पहचानी सी आवाज़ों का, लगा हुआ बाज़ार है…

हर लम्हा डूब रहा है एक ख़ालीपन के साथ,
यह किसके इंतज़ार में, दिल इतना बेकरार है…

ज़िंदगी का सफ़र यह अब कितना ताव्विल^३ हो चला,
लफ्ज़ धुँधलाने लगे और फ़िक्र^४ की भरमार है…

१. शरार = चिंगारी
२. छलावा = नज़र का धोखा
३. ताव्विल = लंबा और थकान भरा
४. फ़िक्र = परेशानी
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Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidkiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

1. sharaar = chingaari (spark)
2. chalaava = nazar ka dhokha (illusion)
3. taaviil = lamba aur thakaan bhara (long and tiring)
4. fikar = pareshaani (botheration)


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Talat

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2008, 10:44:57 AM »

Beautiful Shikha, Its amazing....every time I read you poetry, it feels like someone has written down a beautiful song...


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Shikha12

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2008, 10:48:44 AM »

Thanks Talat... I am really honored.. Usual Smile

But still, I am Learning from some good poets on Yo..


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Shikha12

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2008, 10:59:48 AM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Majid... Usual Smile

Lekin sirf Waah Waah sad5

I was expecting some lines from You and Talat also..


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baadal102

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2008, 11:19:53 AM »

bahoot khoob shika ji
har line aapne aap ko baya ker rahe hai,

(Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil3 ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar4 ki bharmaar hai…)

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2008, 11:23:01 AM »

majid ji bahoot khoob

Dil Ke Zakhmon Ko Dekh Aansoo Bhi Aaj Gamgeen Hai.
Ye To Hum Hain HumDum Jo Aise Haal Main Bhi Jee Rahe Hian,

Baadal


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Shikha12

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2008, 11:27:15 AM »

Quote from: majid on January 07, 2008, 11:19:14 AM

Woh Kya Hai Na Aapne Itna Achha Likha Hai Ki
Hum Likhkar Usme Daagh Lagana Nahi Chahte Hain Ji...

Kher Jab Aapne Kahan Hai To Likhna To Padega Hi..

Tum Bin Zindagi Ka Safar Yun Hi Kat Raha Hai.
Teri Judaai Ka Har Pal.e.Sanam Dil Ko Chub Raha Hai.

Na Jaane Kabse Tanhaaiyon Ne Hume Gere Rakha Hai.
Aur Aise Main Teri Yaadon Ka Gubaar Ud Raha Hai.

Dil Ke Zakhmon Ko Dekh Aansoo Bhi Aaj Gamgeen Hai.
Ye To Hum Hain HumDum Jo Aise Haal Main Bhi Zinda Hain

Har Dum Umeede.e.Deedar Ki Shamma Jala Rakhi Hai Humne
Bus Abto Milan Ki Dua Main Hi Din Raat Dhal Rahe Hai.

Well Hum Aapki Tarha Sjayer Nahi Hai
Galti Hui To Maaf...heheh

Bahut Khoob... Usual Smile

Bahut achha likha hai aapne bhi...
Aur Shukriya bhi... Usual Smile

Humari baat rakhne ke liye...


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Shikha12

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2008, 11:28:16 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on January 07, 2008, 11:19:53 AM

bahoot khoob shika ji
har line aapne aap ko baya ker rahe hai,

(Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil3 ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar4 ki bharmaar hai…)

Baadal

Thanks a lot Baadal.. Usual Smile


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punam

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2008, 11:43:36 AM »

shikha di treef karne k liye labz nahi mere paas..really amazing..


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honeyrose

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2008, 11:49:08 AM »

Bohat accha likha hai shikha ji
app hi humare khaas hai

Zindagi peh aaj kyu nafrat huhi hai
Zindagi jaise gum ka dariya ho gayee hai
Teri yaadein hai iss dil ke kareeb..
Kyu hothi hai mujhe ye dard-de-dil
Tanhiyon mein katti hai yeh Raasthe
Darde dil sehna aasan nah ho saka..


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prmchawla

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2008, 04:15:42 AM »

very nice dosto.

keep it up.

prem


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mask

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2008, 09:25:48 AM »

Bahut khoob likha hai shika ji apne..
Dil khush ho gaya pad ke..

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar hai

beautiful...

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 07, 2008, 10:40:57 AM

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidikiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

1. sharaar = chingaari (spark)
2. chalaava = nazar ka dhokha (illusion)
3. taaviil = lamba aur thakaan bhara (long and tiring)
4. fikar = pareshaani (botheration)


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Pooja

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2008, 09:54:14 PM »

bahoot khoob shikha, nice majid!!


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sika

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2008, 09:51:08 AM »

julm karne wale hans rahe hain
hum ek muskrahat ko taras rahe hain

peekar kar bhi hum bhula na sake
gum is kadar hum par baras rahe hain

na aankho ki num kam hui
aankho se aansu is tarah baras rahe hain


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Shikha12

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2008, 02:28:08 PM »

Thanks a lot Punam, HoneyRose, Prmchawla, Mask, Pooja di and Sika..

Nice Lines Honey and Sika... Applause


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