....~~Sharab-e-Gum~~...

by HumTum on April 15, 2005, 09:45:04 AM
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Peetey hai Sharab-e-gum yhi soch ke aksar hum
Shayad ke nikal jaye ik roz yun hi dum

peetey they aksar hum chaoo mein pedo ki
patjad ka hai mousam hotey hai pattey kum

mat jam utho tum madhosh samj ke mujhko
hai hosh baaki abhi bottle mein hai boondey kum

pehrey kya lgaogey tum maut ki rahooN mein
barish ka mousam hai aati hai hawaayein num !!



HumTum
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vitasta
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2005, 10:05:56 AM »
wah kya baat hai!!! devdas would also be impressed!!
aap peete hain sharab ki ek din nikal jaaye dum,
kyun karte hain khud par zulm reh reh kar marne ka,
marne ki chah nikaliye apne dil se,
aur dekhiye zindagi mein jeene ki vajah bahut milengi,
koshish to kariye rahon mein chalne ki,
koi sahara na mila to saath chalenge hum........
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2005, 10:09:17 AM »
Quote from: "vitasta"
wah kya baat hai!!! devdas would also be impressed!!
aap peete hain sharab ki ek din nikal jaaye dum,
kyun karte hain khud par zulm reh reh kar marne ka,
marne ki chah nikaliye apne dil se,
aur dekhiye zindagi mein jeene ki vajah bahut milengi,
koshish to kariye rahon mein chalne ki,
koi sahara na mila to saath chalenge hum........


very nice Vitasta ji ...... bahoot koob......

Ab to tak-kat  hi nhi chalney ki panv mein, gar hoti bhi
to kis umeed pe khiye ke arzoo kya hai ??
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vitasta
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2005, 10:34:01 AM »
khud mein takat nahin to kisi ka sahara lijiye,
par ye kya ki aap to chalne se pehle hi thak kar baith gaye,
sochiye to zara is duniya mein aap akele to nahin,
"humtum" jab tak saath hain!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2005, 10:38:01 AM »
Amazing ... nice.... bahut hi khoob........

Girti hui Deewar ka humdard hooN lekin
chadtey huye suraj ki prastish nhi karta !!
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vitasta
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2005, 10:40:22 AM »
what's prastish???
thanks!!! .................................
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2005, 10:42:25 AM »
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what's prastish???
thanks!!! .................................


parstish = pooja .. Usual Smile
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vitasta
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2005, 10:44:14 AM »
iska matlab theek se samajh nahin aaya!!!!
thoda explain kijiye plz!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2005, 10:47:46 AM »
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iska matlab theek se samajh nahin aaya!!!!
thoda explain kijiye plz!!!



oke..... iska matlab ki "mein janta hooN ki mujh mein chalney ki takat nhi hai .... lekin mein kissi ka sahara bhi nhi lena chahta......"

"Girti hui deewar ka humdard hooN lekin, suraj se uskey liye koi help nhi mangunga "


hope u understand sad5
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«Reply #9 on: April 15, 2005, 10:51:06 AM »
yes yes of course
i was just a bit confused!!
well i don't have a ready answer to that so i'll reply later.it was a nice one...
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«Reply #10 on: April 15, 2005, 01:13:32 PM »
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yes yes of course
i was just a bit confused!!
well i don't have a ready answer to that so i'll reply later.it was a nice one...


best of luck :wink:
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2005, 03:38:22 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"

Peetey hai Sharab-e-gum yhi soch ke aksar hum
Shayad ke nikal jaye ik roz yun hi dum

peetey they aksar hum chaoo mein pedo ki
patjad ka hai mousam hotey hai pattey kum

mat jam utho tum madhosh samj ke mujhko
hai hosh baaki abhi bottle mein hai boondey kum

pehrey kya lgaogey tum maut ki rahooN mein
barish ka mousam hai aati hai hawaayein num !!



HumTum


wah ji wah!!!!!!!! kabhi maikhane ki sharab to kabhi gum-e-sharab!!

 :D
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2005, 03:44:15 PM »
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wah ji wah!!!!!!!! kabhi maikhane ki sharab to kabhi gum-e-sharab!!

 :D



Meena ji ......

us mai se nhi matlab dil jis-se ho begana
maqsood hai uss mai se dil hi mein jo khicti hai !!!  sad5
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2005, 03:45:44 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"

wah ji wah!!!!!!!! kabhi maikhane ki sharab to kabhi gum-e-sharab!!

 :D



Meena ji ......

us mai se nhi matlab dil jis-se ho begana
maqsood hai uss mai se dil hi mein jo khicti hai !!!  sad5


didnt get it!  sad5
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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2005, 03:50:38 PM »
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Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"

wah ji wah!!!!!!!! kabhi maikhane ki sharab to kabhi gum-e-sharab!!

 :D



Meena ji ......

us mai se nhi matlab dil jis-se ho begana
maqsood hai uss mai se dil hi mein jo khicti hai !!!  sad5


didnt get it!  sad5


us saharb se kuch nhi hota jisey pee ke aadmi madhosh ho jata hai duniya se begana ho jata hai, lekin muskil to us sharab (gum)se hai jo dil mein khichti rehti hai !!!

hope u will understand !!!!  sad5
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