shayad woh mohabbat karti thi.....

by salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:57:00 PM
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zuba pe dard hothon pe hasi ajab waakya oos raat tha
surkh mehndi rachi odha tha reshmi chunar oonka chehra bada hi lajawaab tha

roye toh sab thay kar k rukhsat oonhe par jab woh roye to oosme bhi ek raaz tha
woh roye bahut hum muskuraate rahe koi samajh na saka kii dard behisaab tha

woh bhi rukhsat huye hum bhi jaane lage kii kagaaz oonhone tha pakda diya
aankhe pathra gayi thi pad kar oose gajab tha oosne jo dha diya

band palkon se bhi dekhti woh rahi zeher ka na koi ab ilaaz tha
kii maine sambhala oose,oosne bas yeh kaha main thi bas teri aur tu mera sartaaz tha
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2008, 01:59:05 PM »
this creation of mine is very near to my heart ....
i wish no one ever in his life face that situation
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2008, 02:03:46 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:57:00 PM
zuba pe dard hothon pe hasi ajab waakya oos raat tha
surkh mehndi rachi odha tha reshmi chunar oonka chehra bada hi lajawaab tha

roye toh sab thay kar k rukhsat oonhe par jab woh roye to oosme bhi ek raaz tha
woh roye bahut hum muskuraate rahe koi samajh na saka kii dard behisaab tha

woh bhi rukhsat huye hum bhi jaane lage kii kagaaz oonhone tha pakda diya
aankhe pathra gayi thi pad kar oose gajab tha oosne jo dha diya

band palkon se bhi dekhti woh rahi zeher ka na koi ab ilaaz tha
kii maine sambhala oose,oosne bas yeh kaha main thi bas teri aur tu mera sartaaz tha




Bohot hi Khoobsurat peshkash hai Salil Applause Applause Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2008, 02:04:40 PM »
I too wish, No one should ever face this in his/her life...  sad7

Very Touching Narration.. Salil ji..
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2008, 02:30:32 PM »
Salil bro very touching lines ...   
I will pray for you always...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2008, 04:58:30 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:57:00 PM
zuba pe dard hothon pe hasi ajab waakya oos raat tha
surkh mehndi rachi odha tha reshmi chunar oonka chehra bada hi lajawaab tha

roye toh sab thay kar k rukhsat oonhe par jab woh roye to oosme bhi ek raaz tha
woh roye bahut hum muskuraate rahe koi samajh na saka kii dard behisaab tha

woh bhi rukhsat huye hum bhi jaane lage kii kagaaz oonhone tha pakda diya
aankhe pathra gayi thi pad kar oose gajab tha oosne jo dha diya

band palkon se bhi dekhti woh rahi zeher ka na koi ab ilaaz tha
kii maine sambhala oose,oosne bas yeh kaha main thi bas teri aur tu mera sartaaz tha




Dil ko choo dene wali rachna hai yeh

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2008, 05:04:05 PM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:59:05 PM
this creation of mine is very near to my heart ....
i wish no one ever in his life face that situation

Me too, Salil..Please be happy.
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2008, 05:54:44 PM »
Salil

Bahut he emotional rachna hai aap ki yeh ! sad5

Bahut he feel kar ke likhi gayi hai !

Really felt it while reading it !
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2008, 06:44:03 PM »
Salil miyan,
Wah, dost kya kahne tumhare, khoob dard bharke qalam chalaya hai.
Tum ko padh kar kuchh mahol shayirana sa lagta hai. -
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2008, 04:42:06 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:57:00 PM
zuba pe dard hothon pe hasi ajab waakya oos raat tha
surkh mehndi rachi odha tha reshmi chunar oonka chehra bada hi lajawaab tha

roye toh sab thay kar k rukhsat oonhe par jab woh roye to oosme bhi ek raaz tha
woh roye bahut hum muskuraate rahe koi samajh na saka kii dard behisaab tha

woh bhi rukhsat huye hum bhi jaane lage kii kagaaz oonhone tha pakda diya
aankhe pathra gayi thi pad kar oose gajab tha oosne jo dha diya

band palkon se bhi dekhti woh rahi zeher ka na koi ab ilaaz tha
kii maine sambhala oose,oosne bas yeh kaha main thi bas teri aur tu mera sartaaz tha




Bahut Bahut Khoob Salilji..

aapki iss poetry ne bahut kuch keh diya..

har ek lafz dard ka ehsaas dilata hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2008, 06:14:44 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB SALIL JI,
BAHUT UMDA AUR DARD SE BHARA KALAM
HAM AAPKE LIYE SACHE DIL SE DUA KARTE
HAI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2008, 07:29:58 AM »
salil very heart touching words tearyeyed
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angel4u
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2008, 03:24:08 PM »
Really wonderful lines salil.
it brought tears in my eyes.
sach mein aisi situation kabhi na aaye kisi ki zindagi mein.
be happy always...
take care
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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2008, 10:55:40 AM »
thnks dear angel
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2009, 01:39:49 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on October 22, 2008, 02:03:46 PM
Bohot hi Khoobsurat peshkash hai Salil Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Shikha12 on October 22, 2008, 02:04:40 PM
I too wish, No one should ever face this in his/her life...  sad7

Very Touching Narration.. Salil ji..
Quote from: honeyrose on October 22, 2008, 02:30:32 PM
Salil bro very touching lines ...  
I will pray for you always...
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 22, 2008, 04:58:30 PM
Dil ko choo dene wali rachna hai yeh

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji
Quote from: Celmira on October 22, 2008, 05:04:05 PM
Me too, Salil..Please be happy.
Quote from: Rajbir on October 22, 2008, 05:54:44 PM
Salil

Bahut he emotional rachna hai aap ki yeh ! sad5

Bahut he feel kar ke likhi gayi hai !

Really felt it while reading it !
Quote from: syednaami on October 22, 2008, 06:44:03 PM
Salil miyan,
Wah, dost kya kahne tumhare, khoob dard bharke qalam chalaya hai.
Tum ko padh kar kuchh mahol shayirana sa lagta hai. -
Quote from: khwaish on October 23, 2008, 04:42:06 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salilji..

aapki iss poetry ne bahut kuch keh diya..

har ek lafz dard ka ehsaas dilata hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: k.shael on October 23, 2008, 06:14:44 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB SALIL JI,
BAHUT UMDA AUR DARD SE BHARA KALAM
HAM AAPKE LIYE SACHE DIL SE DUA KARTE
HAI...
BY. K.SHAEL
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 23, 2008, 07:29:58 AM
salil very heart touching words tearyeyed
Quote from: {Angel} on October 24, 2008, 03:24:08 PM
Really wonderful lines salil.
it brought tears in my eyes.
sach mein aisi situation kabhi na aaye kisi ki zindagi mein.
be happy always...
take care
thanks talatdi,jaya di, syed bhai, rajesh bhai, shikha, shally, khwahish,bhawna , and rajbir bhai

aap sabne pasand kiya uska bahut bahut shukriya
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