shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

by salil2002 on September 06, 2009, 08:53:38 AM
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salil2002
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waise toh main ghazal likh raha tha magar kyunki yeh section mere dil k paas hai isliye yahin post kar raha hoon.......
ek shayar ka dard hai isme


woh meri kalam k ehsaas churaata raha
oonhe mehfil main har shaam gaata raha

humein gaaliyan mili jo nazm likh kar
oonhe suna k woh sabse daad pata raha

humne jab shikwa kiya logon se is baat ka
har shakhs mujhe meri aukaat batata raha

kaha shayar ho tum bas likhte raho
tumhaari kismat main nahin aasma ka taara raha

is tarah meri pehchaan bhi oonhone cheen li
aur main andhere main sar chhupaata raha

phir mere baad jab osske ashar, asar khone lage
toh oonhe saahil ka khayal tadpaata raha

isliye aaj kii shaam oos "SAAHIL" k naam likh di
jo ummra bhar gumnaami mein aansu bahata raha
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Sammual
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2009, 09:02:08 AM »
Wah! Bahut Khoob Sahil Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2009, 09:02:59 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Saahil ji,mindblowing creation,really touching. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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umraan
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2009, 09:39:04 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on September 06, 2009, 08:53:38 AM
waise toh main ghazal likh raha tha magar kyunki yeh section mere dil k paas hai isliye yahin post kar raha hoon.......
ek shayar ka dard hai isme






woh meri kalam k ehsaas churaata raha
oonhe mehfil main har shaam gaata raha

humein gaaliyan mili jo nazm likh kar
oonhe suna k woh sabse daad pata raha

humne jab shikwa kiya logon se is baat ka
har shakhs mujhe meri aukaat batata raha

kaha shayar ho tum bas likhte raho
tumhaari kismat main nahin aasma ka taara raha

is tarah meri pehchaan bhi oonhone cheen li
aur main andhere main sar chhupaata raha

phir mere baad jab osske ashar, asar khone lage
toh oonhe saahil ka khayal tadpaata raha

isliye aaj kii shaam oos "SAAHIL" k naam likh di
jo ummra bhar gumnaami mein aansu bahata raha

bahut khub ..Saahil ji

Humne zamaane k samne aana hi chod diya,
apni nzmoo ko mahfiloon  mai sunana hi chod diya,
darte hai un sawalo se jo uth jate  hai nzm sun kar,
jawab mai le na baithe kahi usi ka naam,
jise humne khayaalo mai lana bhi chod diya..
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2009, 10:32:15 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on September 06, 2009, 08:53:38 AM
waise toh main ghazal likh raha tha magar kyunki yeh section mere dil k paas hai isliye yahin post kar raha hoon.......
ek shayar ka dard hai isme


woh meri kalam k ehsaas churaata raha
oonhe mehfil main har shaam gaata raha

humein gaaliyan mili jo nazm likh kar
oonhe suna k woh sabse daad pata raha

humne jab shikwa kiya logon se is baat ka
har shakhs mujhe meri aukaat batata raha

kaha shayar ho tum bas likhte raho
tumhaari kismat main nahin aasma ka taara raha

is tarah meri pehchaan bhi oonhone cheen li
aur main andhere main sar chhupaata raha

phir mere baad jab osske ashar, asar khone lage
toh oonhe saahil ka khayal tadpaata raha

isliye aaj kii shaam oos "SAAHIL" k naam likh di
jo ummra bhar gumnaami mein aansu bahata raha
kya baat hai  saahil ji.......

WOH MERI HI GHAZAL KO KHUD KI BATAKAR CHURAATA RAHA,
KHUD KA BATA KAR MERE EHSAAS,MERE HI DILBAR KO,CHORI-CHORI SUNAATA RAHA.

MERI DILBAR SAMAJH GAYI THI USKI KARTOOTEN,
ANJAAN BANKAR LERAHI THI BAS USKE MAJEH.

EK DIN DILBAR NE KAHA USEY,TUM TOH BAHUT KHOOB LIKHTE HO,
FIR KYUN NAHIN APNI NAZM YAAN GHAZAL LEKAR,KABHI MEHFIL MAIN DIKHTE HO.

APNA THAATH DIKHAKAR USNE KAHE DIYA,AAP KE LIYE HAR WAQAT HAAZIR HAIN HUM,
JIS MEHFIL MAIN CHAAO HAME BULAAO,APNA LIKHA JAROOR SUNAYEGEY HAM.

JAB AAYA MEHFIL MEIN,DEKH KAR MUJHKO,
 PAIRON TALE NIKAL GAYI USKE ZAMEEN.

JAB BARI AAYI USKE SUNAANE KI,
TAB MAAN NA RAHA THA USKA ZAMEER.

KHUD KI LIKHI GHAZAL,KHUD KE HI JABAAN SEY KAHI ACHI LAGTI HAI,KYUN KI USMEN KHUD KE EHSAAS HOTE HAI,
APNI KAHEKAR SUNANE WALE, AURON KI GHAZALON MAIN KAHAN EHSAASON KE ASAR DIKHTE HAI.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2009, 11:07:48 AM »
Waaah Waah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot umda peshkash.. Bahoot Khoob!
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2009, 12:10:15 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Salil... icon_thumleft

Nice ones Cara Ji and Umraan Ji  Thumbs UP
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2009, 12:19:05 PM »
Wah Wah Salil Mere Dost.. Kamaal Kar Diya Yaaar.. Ek Shayar Ke Dard Ko, uski Manodasha Ko Behad Succhaai ke sath Lafzon Me Piroya Hai aapne.. Har Baar Ki Tarah Superbbbbbbbbbbb Yaaaaaaaaar.... Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen is Dost Ki..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2009, 12:28:43 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Applause

Wonderful creation as usual Cara sb and Umraan ji  Clapping Smiley
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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2009, 12:33:33 PM »
Behad khoobsurti se apne ehsaason ko saamne rakha hia Salil...

Clapping Smiley As usual too good Clapping Smiley
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2009, 04:07:13 AM »
Quote from: Sammual on September 06, 2009, 09:02:08 AM
Wah! Bahut Khoob Sahil Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: madhuwesh on September 06, 2009, 09:02:59 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Saahil ji,mindblowing creation,really touching. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Sophi on September 06, 2009, 11:07:48 AM
Waaah Waah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot umda peshkash.. Bahoot Khoob!
bahut bahut shukriya
sam bhai
madhu ji
and sophi dear
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2009, 06:13:07 AM »
Bahut Khoob Salil..Bahut Hi Aacha likha hai..wah dil ko choo liya.!!!!!

Shally.
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poppoetry
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2009, 10:06:27 AM »
bahut hi khoooooob Saahil ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne.....behtrin
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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2009, 06:31:33 AM »
Quote from: umraan on September 06, 2009, 09:39:04 AM
bahut khub ..Saahil ji

Humne zamaane k samne aana hi chod diya,
apni nzmoo ko mahfiloon  mai sunana hi chod diya,
darte hai un sawalo se jo uth jate  hai nzm sun kar,
jawab mai le na baithe kahi usi ka naam,
jise humne khayaalo mai lana bhi chod diya..
bahut bahut achche umraan ji dil ko chhu lene wali baat kaaho hai aapne
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 06:39:36 AM »
Quote from: cara on September 06, 2009, 10:32:15 AM
kya baat hai  saahil ji.......

WOH MERI HI GHAZAL KO KHUD KI BATAKAR CHURAATA RAHA,
KHUD KA BATA KAR MERE EHSAAS,MERE HI DILBAR KO,CHORI-CHORI SUNAATA RAHA.

MERI DILBAR SAMAJH GAYI THI USKI KARTOOTEN,
ANJAAN BANKAR LERAHI THI BAS USKE MAJEH.

EK DIN DILBAR NE KAHA USEY,TUM TOH BAHUT KHOOB LIKHTE HO,
FIR KYUN NAHIN APNI NAZM YAAN GHAZAL LEKAR,KABHI MEHFIL MAIN DIKHTE HO.

APNA THAATH DIKHAKAR USNE KAHE DIYA,AAP KE LIYE HAR WAQAT HAAZIR HAIN HUM,
JIS MEHFIL MAIN CHAAO HAME BULAAO,APNA LIKHA JAROOR SUNAYEGEY HAM.

JAB AAYA MEHFIL MEIN,DEKH KAR MUJHKO,
 PAIRON TALE NIKAL GAYI USKE ZAMEEN.

JAB BARI AAYI USKE SUNAANE KI,
TAB MAAN NA RAHA THA USKA ZAMEER.

KHUD KI LIKHI GHAZAL,KHUD KE HI JABAAN SEY KAHI ACHI LAGTI HAI,KYUN KI USMEN KHUD KE EHSAAS HOTE HAI,
APNI KAHEKAR SUNANE WALE, AURON KI GHAZALON MAIN KAHAN EHSAASON KE ASAR DIKHTE HAI.




bahut  achche cara ji
talat di thanks a lot
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