shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2009, 06:42:54 AM »

Quote from: Mann on September 06, 2009, 12:19:05 PM

Wah Wah Salil Mere Dost.. Kamaal Kar Diya Yaaar.. Ek Shayar Ke Dard Ko, uski Manodasha Ko Behad Succhaai ke sath Lafzon Me Piroya Hai aapne.. Har Baar Ki Tarah Superbbbbbbbbbbb Yaaaaaaaaar....

Daad Kubool Karen is Dost Ki..

**~** Mann **~**

Quote from: Roja on September 06, 2009, 12:28:43 PM

Bahut bahut khoob

Wonderful creation as usual Cara sb and Umraan ji

Quote from: {Angel} on September 06, 2009, 12:33:33 PM

Behad khoobsurti se apne ehsaason ko saamne rakha hia Salil...

Clapping Smiley

As usual too good Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriya mann bhai
huzena dear
and roja dear


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salma786

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Re: shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

«Reply #16 on: September 11, 2009, 05:01:16 PM »

bahoot bahoot acha likha apne salil


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salil2002

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Re: shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

«Reply #17 on: September 12, 2009, 05:57:05 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on September 11, 2009, 05:01:16 PM

bahoot bahoot acha likha apne salil

thanks a lot salma dear


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salil2002

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Re: shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

«Reply #18 on: January 09, 2010, 01:24:27 PM »

thanks angel ,roja and pooja dear


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guhar

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Re: shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

«Reply #19 on: January 09, 2010, 03:12:15 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on September 06, 2009, 08:53:38 AM

waise toh main ghazal likh raha tha magar kyunki yeh section mere dil k paas hai isliye yahin post kar raha hoon.......
ek shayar ka dard hai isme

woh meri kalam k ehsaas churaata raha
oonhe mehfil main har shaam gaata raha

humein gaaliyan mili jo nazm likh kar
oonhe suna k woh sabse daad pata raha

humne jab shikwa kiya logon se is baat ka
har shakhs mujhe meri aukaat batata raha

kaha shayar ho tum bas likhte raho
tumhaari kismat main nahin aasma ka taara raha

is tarah meri pehchaan bhi oonhone cheen li
aur main andhere main sar chhupaata raha

phir mere baad jab osske ashar, asar khone lage
toh oonhe saahil ka khayal tadpaata raha

isliye aaj kii shaam oos "SAAHIL" k naam likh di
jo ummra bhar gumnaami mein aansu bahata raha

raat bhar meri aankhein nahi soyi,
is khyaal me mehnat se ik bemisaal
tasveer ubhar ke aaygi.
par kya khyaal tha ki neende meri
chura ke ye,
aankhon me rang aur kisi k sajaayegi.

khoob likha saahil ji.


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salil2002

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Re: shayr ho tum bas likhte raho ~~ SAAHIl

«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2011, 08:02:39 AM »

thanks a lot guhar dear ;-)


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