Shikayat hai ~~~~saahil

by salil2002 on September 04, 2009, 10:39:08 AM
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dard hai, dil hai, aur ek shikayat hai
zakhm hai, malham hai, aur aapki ihaanat hai

poochte hai jab kabhi zakhm ka haal chal
toh dard hai, dar hai aur ek shikayat hai

ashq bhi toote huye,kissii ne na roka inhe
rookh talkh hai, dekh k mehboob,kii inaayat hai

aur ek woh hai,hanste hai zakhm dekhkar
lab khusk hai kaise kahe ,jo inki hikaayat hai

ab toh shab dhale aur main dhal jaun uske sang
mehfil main bikhri huyi mujhse hi najakat hai

bade besharm hai warna yahan ab log ae MALIK
dikhti nahin kisi k dil main tujhse lagawat hai

ab band kar yeh khel bada thak gaya hoon main
ab gham hai is dil main,aur honthon par shikayat hai

dard kii intehaa kar di hai tumne jaanmann
oos par yeh tera muskuraana , gam nihaayat hai



ihaanat= insult
hikaayat= story
nihaayat= too much
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 10:43:41 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Salil Bhai..

Maza Aa Gaya Padhkar!!! Har Ashaar par Wah Wah Wah Hi Kehta Gaya..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 10:56:13 AM »
Bahut hi khoob Saahil ji....lajwaab...kya khoob piroya hai alfaazon ko....
bahut khooob

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 11:04:34 AM »
dard hai, dil hai, aur ek shikayat hai
zakhm hai, malham hai, aur aapki ihaanat hai

poochte hai jab kabhi zakhm ka haal chal
toh dard hai, dar hai aur ek shikayat hai

ashq bhi toote huye,kissii ne na roka inhe
rookh talkh hai, dekh k mehboob,kii inaayat hai

aur ek woh hai,hanste hai zakhm dekhkar
lab khusk hai kaise kahe ,jo inki hikaayat hai

ab toh shab dhale aur main dhal jaun uske sang
mehfil main bikhri huyi mujhse hi najakat hai

bade besharm hai warna yahan ab log ae MALIK
dikhti nahin kisi k dil main tujhse lagawat hai

ab band kar yeh khel bada thak gaya hoon main
ab gham hai is dil main,aur honthon par shikayat hai

dard kii intehaa kar di hai tumne jaanmann
oos par yeh tera muskuraana , gam nihaayat hai



ihaanat= insult
hikaayat= story
nihaayat= too much
Good poetry janab.keep it up
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2009, 04:42:58 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wow bahoot khoob Saahil bro... jalad he wapis akar kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2009, 02:54:33 AM »
Beautifully written salil as usual.

Sach mein bahut hi dard bhara kalaam hia Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2009, 03:01:33 AM »
dard hai, dil hai, aur ek shikayat hai
zakhm hai, malham hai, aur aapki ihaanat hai

poochte hai jab kabhi zakhm ka haal chal
toh dard hai, dar hai aur ek shikayat hai

ashq bhi toote huye,kissii ne na roka inhe
rookh talkh hai, dekh k mehboob,kii inaayat hai

aur ek woh hai,hanste hai zakhm dekhkar
lab khusk hai kaise kahe ,jo inki hikaayat hai

ab toh shab dhale aur main dhal jaun uske sang
mehfil main bikhri huyi mujhse hi najakat hai

bade besharm hai warna yahan ab log ae MALIK
dikhti nahin kisi k dil main tujhse lagawat hai

ab band kar yeh khel bada thak gaya hoon main
ab gham hai is dil main,aur honthon par shikayat hai

dard kii intehaa kar di hai tumne jaanmann
oos par yeh tera muskuraana , gam nihaayat hai



ihaanat= insult
hikaayat= story
nihaayat= too much

Waaah  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Salil dear. dard bara shayari likha hai aapne. dil ko chu liya her alfaz sad5
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2009, 04:21:04 AM »
Wonderful Saahil its really a beautiful creation... Too Good dear !
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2009, 09:04:06 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Salil Bhai..

Maza Aa Gaya Padhkar!!! Har Ashaar par Wah Wah Wah Hi Kehta Gaya..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahgut shukriya khwahish bhai
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2009, 10:54:19 AM »


SAAHILJI bahut achha dard se bhara likha hai..... Applause Applause
dard hai, dil hai, aur ek shikayat hai
zakhm hai, malham hai, aur aapki ihaanat hai

poochte hai jab kabhi zakhm ka haal chal
toh dard hai, dar hai aur ek shikayat hai

ashq bhi toote huye,kissii ne na roka inhe
rookh talkh hai, dekh k mehboob,kii inaayat hai

aur ek woh hai,hanste hai zakhm dekhkar
lab khusk hai kaise kahe ,jo inki hikaayat hai

ab toh shab dhale aur main dhal jaun uske sang
mehfil main bikhri huyi mujhse hi najakat hai

bade besharm hai warna yahan ab log ae MALIK
dikhti nahin kisi k dil main tujhse lagawat hai

ab band kar yeh khel bada thak gaya hoon main
ab gham hai is dil main,aur honthon par shikayat hai

dard kii intehaa kar di hai tumne jaanmann
oos par yeh tera muskuraana , gam nihaayat hai



ihaanat= insult
hikaayat= story
nihaayat= too much
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 01:49:09 PM »

SAAHILJI bahut achha dard se bhara likha hai..... Applause Applause
bahut bahut shukriya anamikaa ji
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salma786
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2009, 04:59:30 PM »
Very nice salil... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2009, 04:05:38 AM »
Salil Bhaiiiiiiiii... Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob mere dost.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Alfaazon aur Jazzbaaton se Saji Rachna Pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2009, 05:58:43 AM »
Bahut hi khoob Saahil ji....lajwaab...kya khoob piroya hai alfaazon ko....
bahut khooob

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Good poetry janab.keep it up
thanks a lot waqif bhai
and pooja dear
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2009, 06:01:49 AM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wow bahoot khoob Saahil bro... jalad he wapis akar kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!!
Beautifully written salil as usual.

Sach mein bahut hi dard bhara kalaam hia Applause
thanks a lot pooja di and angel dear
and di vaada nibhaiyega
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