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Kyon har bar ye shikwa hum se is zamaane ko hai
Lagta hai dard ka mausam phir laut kar aane ko hai
Jisne kabhi mere Intezar me daaman bhigo rakha tha
un ankhon me hi meri maut ka khwaab sanjo rakha tha
kya rakha tha chhupakar haathon me kab jaana tha
khule jo haath to kuch tang lakeeron ka mit jaana tha
the kuch mazboor ke chaah kar bi hum tere na ho sake
aur phir tum bhi the ke mere hokar bhi mere na ho sake
jaane kab aayi shaam, kab aakar saba roshni de gayi
kab aakar maut ne thaama daaman, kab zindagi le gayi
dafan in saanso ko ab kya kuredte ho tum kya paaoge
jo so chukka hai chain ki neend usay tum kaise jagaaoge
hairaan na ho ke mere seene me ab dil dhadakta nahin hai
aisa nahi ke dafan hokar lahad me 'Intezar' tadapta nahin hai… !
Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2011, 06:27:00 PM » |
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behaaddddddd khoobsurat peshkash.....kitna dard hai har alfaaz mein....
kya kahu...dard ko bhi khoobsurati ka jama pehna diya aapne...bahut khoob intzaar ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2011, 06:29:33 PM » |
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boht khob intzar ji
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2011, 07:50:42 PM » |
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ya rakha tha chhupakar haathon me kab jaana tha
khule jo haath to kuch tang lakeeron ka mit jaana tha
the kuch mazboor ke chaah kar bi hum tere na ho sake
aur phir tum bhi the ke mere hokar bhi mere na ho sake
ye lines kuch zyada bhaa gai dil ko intezar ji......ab kya kahun aapko k kya feel kiya ise padhkar.....pehle to apne andaaz me jawab de dete the ab likha nahin jata.......par koshish krenge iska jawab dene ki......
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2011, 01:11:39 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2011, 03:57:23 PM » |
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Nikhaar ji aapne dil se pasand kiya, tahe dil se aapka bahut bahut shukriya... yun hi saath dijiyega... Intezar ! behaaddddddd khoobsurat peshkash.....kitna dard hai har alfaaz mein....
kya kahu...dard ko bhi khoobsurati ka jama pehna diya aapne...bahut khoob intzaar ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2011, 05:09:55 PM » |
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Bahut badiya Peshkash rahi INTEZAAR ji..!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2011, 05:22:56 PM » |
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saahill ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... Intezar ! boht khob intzar ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2011, 05:27:21 AM » |
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bahot ache janaab…
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2011, 09:43:56 AM » |
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Shukriya kasak ji... bahut bahut shukriya aapka... aapne wakt diya hum jaise ko... aur aapke andaaz ke jawaab ka intezar rahega... Intezar ! ya rakha tha chhupakar haathon me kab jaana tha
khule jo haath to kuch tang lakeeron ka mit jaana tha
the kuch mazboor ke chaah kar bi hum tere na ho sake
aur phir tum bhi the ke mere hokar bhi mere na ho sake
ye lines kuch zyada bhaa gai dil ko intezar ji......ab kya kahun aapko k kya feel kiya ise padhkar.....pehle to apne andaaz me jawab de dete the ab likha nahin jata.......par koshish krenge iska jawab dene ki......
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2011, 03:21:58 PM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Intzaar Ji.. Ak Badkar Ak Sher Likha hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda... Lajawaab !!
~Divya~
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2011, 09:57:15 AM » |
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Anaam bhai shukriya aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne pasand kiya aur dil se mehsoos kiya... aur hum shayar kaha... bas kuch lafzo ka dard hai jo panno par bikhar jaata hai... ! humesha saath rehiyega... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2011, 02:19:14 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Irshad sahab, jo pasand kiya aapne... Intezar ! Bahut badiya Peshkash rahi INTEZAAR ji..!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2011, 02:20:23 PM » |
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sarfira ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... Intezar ! bahot ache janaab…
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2011, 02:31:56 PM » |
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divya ji... sabse pehle aapka bahut bahut shukriya dil se... aur aaj aapki wajah se ek puraana dard phir ubhar aaya... bahut din ke baad ye naam (DIVYA) aaj hamaare hontho par aaya... khair aap apna khayal rakhiyega... Khush rehiye... saath dete rehiyega... Intezar ! Waah Waah Kya baat hai Intzaar Ji.. Ak Badkar Ak Sher Likha hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda... Lajawaab !!
~Divya~
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