shyar bana diya

by pritam tripathi on December 14, 2012, 08:04:20 AM
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chalte rahe jis raah pr hum apne hi dhun me
logon ne us raah pr kaantein bicha diya

jis bewafa ko dekhkar sab pathar ke ban gaye
unke liye humne aansoon ka dariya baha diya
 
koi shauq se karta nahi bewafai yaaron
kuch dil me tha jisne bewafa bana diya

ab ho chuka jo ho chuka uska kya sochun
ek dard tha seene me jisne shayar bana diya
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2012, 08:45:05 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2012, 09:55:53 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2012, 11:10:31 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2012, 12:58:57 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on December 14, 2012, 08:04:20 AM
chalte rahe jis raah pr hum apne hi dhun me
logon ne us raah pr kaantein bicha diya

jis bewafa ko dekhkar sab pathar ke ban gaye
unke liye humne aansoon ka dariya baha diya
 
koi shauq se karta nahi bewafai yaaron
kuch dil me tha jisne bewafa bana diya

ab ho chuka jo ho chuka uska kya sochun
ek dard tha seene me jisne shayar bana diya


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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2012, 12:59:30 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 01:59:42 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on December 14, 2012, 08:45:05 AM
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2012, 02:01:48 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on December 14, 2012, 09:55:53 AM
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2012, 02:04:40 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 02:05:56 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on December 14, 2012, 12:59:30 PM
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 02:09:41 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on December 14, 2012, 08:04:20 AM
chalte rahe jis raah pr hum apne hi dhun me
logon ne us raah pr kaantein bicha diya

jis bewafa ko dekhkar sab pathar ke ban gaye
unke liye humne aansoon ka dariya baha diya
 
koi shauq se karta nahi bewafai yaaron
kuch dil me tha jisne bewafa bana diya

ab ho chuka jo ho chuka uska kya sochun
ek dard tha seene me jisne shayar bana diya

bahut khoob tripathi jee
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2012, 06:05:15 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on December 14, 2012, 02:09:41 PM
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