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«Reply #75 on: April 15, 2010, 01:25:48 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai.... aapke aakhri do lines k jawab me kuch likhe bina raha nahi gaya...


dekha to humne bhi hai jalte patango ko,
par ishq me uske to jalti shama bhi hai,
aag husn ka sab kuch jalaa deti hai,
hota dhuan dhuan mohabbat ka sama bhi hai...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 15, 2010, 08:20:54 AM
Bade Romaantic mood mai sab ne bhoot achha likha hai.... Applause Applause Applause


Geet-di tum yu na tadphao apne hushn kay in parwaano ko
Na chalao lekhni se teer jo ghayal kar de in aashiko ko

Kapil Yu hushn pe ruswah hote hamne bahooton ko dekha hai
Shama pe jalte patango ko bhee hamne kai baar dekha hai
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«Reply #76 on: April 15, 2010, 08:45:51 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 15, 2010, 08:20:54 AM
Bade Romaantic mood mai sab ne bhoot achha likha hai.... Applause Applause Applause


Geet-di tum yu na tadphao apne hushn kay in parwaano ko
Na chalao lekhni se teer jo ghayal kar de in aashiko ko

Kapil Yu hushn pe ruswah hote hamne bahooton ko dekha hai
Shama pe jalte patango ko bhee hamne kai baar dekha hai





he he he thnx sweety...

Koyal main tou bus kapil ji ka sath de rahi hu,
unki kalam kuch sawal karti hai main unka jawab de rahi hu...Giggle
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«Reply #77 on: April 15, 2010, 09:08:48 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 14, 2010, 07:44:39 PM
Shukriya Geet ji... aapne bhi bahut pyaara likha hai... waise galat baat hai ye ki aapko hamari haalat pe hasi aa rahi hai... sad5

dekh k tujhe yun behosh hain hum,
teri qaatil aankhen mera qatl kar gayi,
bin piye sharaab yun madhosh hain hum,
tere husn ka jaam humpe asar kar gayi...


bahut khoob aur main tou mazak kar rahi thi kapil ji...

Hai dard mein gumgheen ek dil,
hai bahut hi halat-e-sangeen ek dil,
gar mil jaye kisika sath ise bhi..
tou khushi se ho jaye rangeen ek dil......
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«Reply #78 on: April 16, 2010, 01:29:19 AM »
Bahut khoob Geet ji... aapka mazaak bhi humein pasand aaya. bas saath hi to maang rahen hai aap par itna dukhi hoke q?

is jahaan ki saari khushiyaan tujhe la du,
maange to chaand ka tukda bhi main la du,
maanga tune to bas hai saath hi mera,
maange to tohfe me apni jaan main la du...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 15, 2010, 09:08:48 PM
bahut khoob aur main tou mazak kar rahi thi kapil ji...

Hai dard mein gumgheen ek dil,
hai bahut hi halat-e-sangeen ek dil,
gar mil jaye kisika sath ise bhi..
tou khushi se ho jaye rangeen ek dil......
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«Reply #79 on: April 16, 2010, 11:32:42 AM »
Na karna vishwaas sakhee inke khokhle wado pe
Inkee jaan tou khilona hai tohfe mai de denge




Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 01:29:19 AM
Bahut khoob Geet ji... aapka mazaak bhi humein pasand aaya. bas saath hi to maang rahen hai aap par itna dukhi hoke q?

is jahaan ki saari khushiyaan tujhe la du,
maange to chaand ka tukda bhi main la du,
maanga tune to bas hai saath hi mera,
maange to tohfe me apni jaan main la du...
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«Reply #80 on: April 16, 2010, 01:08:47 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 01:29:19 AM
Bahut khoob Geet ji... aapka mazaak bhi humein pasand aaya. bas saath hi to maang rahen hai aap par itna dukhi hoke q?

is jahaan ki saari khushiyaan tujhe la du,
maange to chaand ka tukda bhi main la du,
maanga tune to bas hai saath hi mera,
maange to tohfe me apni jaan main la du...


shukriya ji...jiska sath chahiye vo merra nhi hai..

Main chal du jo vo koi raah bana de,
main so jau jo vo sir merra sehela de,
chaht hai uske ishq mein umar guzarne ki..
main thoda chain pau jo vo gum merra behela de......
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«Reply #81 on: April 16, 2010, 02:58:39 PM »
Aap q bhadka rahe ho Geet ji ko ?

kyun aapko hamari baaton pe vishwaas nahi hota,
hamari mohabbat ka kyun ehsaas nahi hota,
aazmaake dekhte kabhi aap hamari mohabbat ko,
kabhi hamare waadon pe avishwaas nahi hota...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 16, 2010, 11:32:42 AM
Na karna vishwaas sakhee inke khokhle wado pe
Inkee jaan tou khilona hai tohfe mai de denge
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«Reply #82 on: April 16, 2010, 03:24:46 PM »
Welcome ji... to kya hua. kehna aasaan hota hai par karna thoda mushkil . bahut jyada nahi... koi aur mil jayega aapko... bas haste haste zindagi guzaarte rahiye ... khushi dur nahi hai.... koi chahne waala aapke aaspaas hi hai...

mohabbat pe likha kisi ka naam nahi hota,
aaj ek se hai kal kisi aur se ho jayega,
jab tak koi hame na chahe ehsaas nahi hota,
kal kisi ki chahat me haar k dil uska ho jayega...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 16, 2010, 01:08:47 PM
shukriya ji...jiska sath chahiye vo merra nhi hai..

Main chal du jo vo koi raah bana de,
main so jau jo vo sir merra sehela de,
chaht hai uske ishq mein umar guzarne ki..
main thoda chain pau jo vo gum merra behela de......
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«Reply #83 on: April 16, 2010, 03:47:55 PM »
wah sahbi ne lajawab likha hai .. dad hazir sub ke liye qubool karen..



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«Reply #84 on: April 16, 2010, 07:05:12 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 16, 2010, 11:32:42 AM
Na karna vishwaas sakhee inke khokhle wado pe
Inkee jaan tou khilona hai tohfe mai de denge





Khanjar chale ya chalaye koi teer..
oye merri koyaliya terri di hai female veer......Giggle
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«Reply #85 on: April 16, 2010, 07:12:18 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 03:24:46 PM
Welcome ji... to kya hua. kehna aasaan hota hai par karna thoda mushkil . bahut jyada nahi... koi aur mil jayega aapko... bas haste haste zindagi guzaarte rahiye ... khushi dur nahi hai.... koi chahne waala aapke aaspaas hi hai...

mohabbat pe likha kisi ka naam nahi hota,
aaj ek se hai kal kisi aur se ho jayega,
jab tak koi hame na chahe ehsaas nahi hota,
kal kisi ki chahat me haar k dil uska ho jayega...


bahut khoob ji dhire dhire apki lekhi nikharti jaa rahi hai...kapil ji koyal tou yu hi mazak kar rahi hai..aap dil pe naa le...aur shukiya apki baato k liye...

Jis chehre ki talash thi vo saamne hai,
per vo tab aya jab mujhe uska intezar nhi,
use apnana bhi ek vehem jaisa lagta hai..
shayad mujhe apni chahto pe pehle jaisa aetbar nhi......
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«Reply #86 on: April 17, 2010, 08:47:42 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji. Sab aapka hi kiya karaya hai. aap likhti hain aur jawaab me humse kuch na kuch ban jata hai. Waise sach kahen to humein likhna aata hi nahi hai. Likhti to aap hain. Simply superb. bahut achcha likhte hain aap. Hum koshish karte hain aapke nakshe kadam pe chalne ki. Par aapke pao k dhool k barabar bhi nahi hai. Kaash aap jaisa likhte hai uska 1% bhi main likh paata to khushi milti.Aapka likha padh k to lagta hai hamara likhna kalam k liye apmaan hai. bahut khoob likhte hain aap. Too good.

Aur Koyal ji ki baaton ka main bilkul bhi bura nahi maanta.  Yu hasi mazak nahi hoga to zindagi ka aanand kaise lenge. Jaruri hai ye bhi...

n u r always welcome... har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapne bahut khoob likha hai...

muskaan teri mere dil kya asar karti hai hum bata nahi sakte,
na ho wo to zakhm kitne gehre karti hai hum dikha nahi sakte,
dikha sakte hain hum tujhe apni har muskaan har khushi,
chah k bhi hum tujhe apne dil ka dard dikha nahi sakte...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 16, 2010, 07:12:18 PM
bahut khoob ji dhire dhire apki lekhi nikharti jaa rahi hai...kapil ji koyal tou yu hi mazak kar rahi hai..aap dil pe naa le...aur shukiya apki baato k liye...

Jis chehre ki talash thi vo saamne hai,
per vo tab aya jab mujhe uska intezar nhi,
use apnana bhi ek vehem jaisa lagta hai..
shayad mujhe apni chahto pe pehle jaisa aetbar nhi......
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«Reply #87 on: April 17, 2010, 08:50:09 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Qadeer ji...!!!!

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 16, 2010, 03:47:55 PM
wah sahbi ne lajawab likha hai .. dad hazir sub ke liye qubool karen..



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«Reply #88 on: April 17, 2010, 12:04:24 PM »
Lo ho gayee apni tou chhuti.... notworthy notworthy notworthy
Jab do likhne wale raazi tou kya karega kaazi..... Giggle Giggle Giggle
Par ye Chutki lena Sikhaya to Geet-di aapne he hai.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
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«Reply #89 on: April 17, 2010, 12:10:34 PM »
Hamari mehfil me aapka poora poora swagat hai Koyal ji... aap apni chhutti q kar rahe hain... aap dil kholke likhiye... Usual Smile
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