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by nidhi_yadein on April 05, 2005, 09:29:21 AM
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"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2005, 09:32:14 AM »
wao...wonderfull Nidhi sis....
Hello ! how r u ?
U always write hmmmm wonderfull n deep...keep on writing
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2005, 09:36:08 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
wao...wonderfull Nidhi sis....
Hello ! how r you ?
you always write hmmmm wonderfull n deep...keep on writing


o wow.....i m so happy 2 see first reply of urs  :D   :D

thank u so much Usual Smile

I m fine,wat bout u?
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2005, 09:37:11 AM »
nidhi very nice............................................. .........................................
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2005, 09:45:45 AM »
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nidhi very nice............................................. .........................................


thank u so muchhhhhh dhadkan....................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2005, 10:11:11 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"



simply great....... no words to explian.... and it dosen't need either......
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2005, 12:26:29 PM »
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"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"



simply great....... no words to explian.... and it dosen't need either......


Thank u so much humtum :D
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cooljames
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2005, 07:16:44 AM »
arz kiya hai
 
 aap ki zindagi me kabhi koi gam na ho;
 aap ki aankhe kabhi nam na ho;
 aapko mile zindagi ki har kushi;
 bhale hi us kushai me hum ho na ho.
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2005, 07:28:34 AM »
Nice one james,but do write (nm) if its not ur creation.thanx.
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cooljames
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2005, 07:44:28 AM »
hai this was 1 of the best shayari i saw  im impreesed  i would like that u should write more kyunki aap to hamse bhi aacha likh lete hai
     god bless u
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pankhuri
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2005, 08:19:08 AM »
its very good
mere pass tumhari shayari ko achcha kehne ke liye shabd nahi hai u r really very good
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2005, 08:42:58 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"

It's Beautiful Nidhi.....
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2005, 09:11:24 AM »
Quote from: "cooljames"
hai this was 1 of the best shayari i saw  im impreesed  i would like that you should write more kyunki aap to hamse bhi aacha likh lete hai
     god bless you


Thank u Usual Smile  i wud try 2 continue.
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2005, 09:15:19 AM »
Quote from: "pankhuri"
its very good
mere pass tumhari shayari ko achcha kehne ke liye shabd nahi hai you r really very good
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Aaj bhi main use bhula nahi payi hoon,
  dil ke jakhm mita nahi paayi hoon,
  aaj bhi pyar k naam be wohi yaad aata hai,
  jise bhool jana dil ye chahta hai,
  har waqt wohi kyon yaad aata hai,
  pyar ke sapne saare toot chuke hain,
  umeedein jeevan ki rooth chuki hain,
  phir kisliye jee rahi hoon main,
  sach kahun to maut se badtar zindgi hai ye,
  kyon ye jeevan ruk kar bhi nahi rukta,
  kyon ye sansein thham ke bhi nahi thamtin,
  kyon aaj bhi ek aas hai dil mein,
  jiska kabhi koi wajood hi nahin,
  kyon aaj bhi hai woh silsila........"


Pleasure that u liked my work,welcome 2 yoindia.thanx. Usual Smile

Thanx Aryaan Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2005, 02:36:17 PM »
Ab sab ki taraf se padh ke hamari taarif aapko khokhli lagegi ...   But anyways ...

It was really a fantastic one ...
Keep it up ...
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