....~~Silsilaa~~....

by HumTum on February 10, 2005, 04:12:21 PM
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raaz kii baaten likhii aur Khat khulaa rahane diyaa
jaane kyon rusavaaion kaa silsilaa rahane diyaa


umr bhar mere saath rahakar vo na samajhaa dil kii baat
do dilon ke daramiyaaN ik faasalaa rahane diyaa


apani fitarat vo badal paayaa na isake baavajuud
Khatm kii ranjish magar gilaa rahane diyaa


main samajhataa thaa Khushi degi mujhe "HumTum" fareb
is liye main ne Gamon se raabataa rahane diyaa........( Sudir )


HumTum
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thycreator
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2005, 04:14:36 PM »
Wah HumTum....gud work,
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2005, 04:16:09 PM »
Waah Humtum!!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2005, 04:19:27 PM »
Shukriya Talat ji n The Creater ji....
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2005, 05:26:10 PM »
"main samajhataa thaa Khushi degi mujhe "HumTum" fareb
is liye main ne Gamon se raabataa rahane diyaa........"


beautiful lines!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2005, 05:27:01 PM »
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"main samajhataa thaa Khushi degi mujhe "HumTum" fareb
is liye main ne Gamon se raabataa rahane diyaa........"


beautiful lines!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D


Shukriya ji Shukriya....
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2005, 05:58:28 PM »
oyeeeeeeeee humari ines chori kar li apne!  :D  chalo koi baat nahin glasses2
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2005, 10:34:12 AM »
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oyeeeeeeeee humari ines chori kar li apne!  :D  chalo koi baat nahin glasses2


ooppss sory Meena ji ...... i like these lines very much " Shukriya ji shukriya " :D
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abhishek_gaurav
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2005, 03:04:35 PM »
subhan allah
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HumTum
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2005, 03:10:56 PM »
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subhan allah


Shukriya janab shikriya....
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abhishek_gaurav
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2005, 03:15:36 PM »
nahi aap sach me bahut achha likhte hain
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2005, 03:15:46 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
oyeeeeeeeee humari ines chori kar li apne!  :D  chalo koi baat nahin glasses2


ooppss sory Meena ji ...... i like these lines very much " Shukriya ji shukriya " :D


lol its ok na!  :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2005, 03:17:27 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
oyeeeeeeeee humari ines chori kar li apne!  :D  chalo koi baat nahin glasses2


ooppss sory Meena ji ...... i like these lines very much " Shukriya ji shukriya " :D


lol its ok na!  :D


to phir thanku hai ji...
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abhishek_gaurav
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2005, 03:19:54 PM »
tanku kis baat ke liye diya jaa raha hai
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HumTum
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2005, 03:24:02 PM »
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tanku kis baat ke liye diya jaa raha hai


are janab aap hamareY anujuman mein aake hamari shayri ki tariif ker rhey hain to thanku to kehna hi pdega na k nhi....
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